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[Husbarn]

Thanks for the help guys.

Article is fixed now.

 

[wizard04]

Amm I am not a native English speaker but this part was not necessary, it really dumb

Porsche driver has probably made a big mistake by leaving the crime scene, because when the police finds him, he's gonna be in big trouble. No information who is the causer of the collision. Maybe the Porsche driver wasn't the causer and by leaving the crime scene, now, he looks like he is the causer. Or maybe he is the causer and it's why he has run away...


To many but and or, its speculating and not informative.

 

[Husbarn]

Amm I am not a native English speaker but this part was not necessary, it really dumb

Porsche driver has probably made a big mistake by leaving the crime scene, because when the police finds him, he's gonna be in big trouble. No information who is the causer of the collision. Maybe the Porsche driver wasn't the causer and by leaving the crime scene, now, he looks like he is the causer. Or maybe he is the causer and it's why he has run away...


To many but and or, its speculating and not informative.

But as not a native speaker, you think that article grammatically is correct?

I just need an answer if it's grammatically correct or not. The rest is not important.

 

[wizard04]

There are 3 little mistakes and the "..." in the end, they are unnecessary.

 

[The Scarlet Pimp]

based on what gets posted online, i would be very surprised if anyone even notices the errors.

 

[Jacko6933]

Definitely would need some serious editing, there are several mistakes, it just doesn't read well and you can see that it's not written by a native.

And yeah, the paragraph about the Porsche driver is pretty much gibberish.

I would never put this to any of my websites...

Good luck!

 

[badaz]

to be honest there are some serious mistakes in your article .

 

[archon10]

Obviously, cheap writing. You get what you pay for. You should hire an editor or know how to edit content before you put 3rd party writing on your site.

If you can't pay for a real writer, though, you can't expect much more for it. He's giving you what you paid for.

After reading this snippet, I'm pretty sure the first part is plagiarized and the last part is just total dung. He's an ESL for sure. hahahahah. Last part made me laugh.


haha you got what you paid for though.


I'll list the problems.

A fatal crash happened last Saturday at around 5.50pm in Bedford, UK. Two cars were involved in this accident, a Porsche 911 and an Audi R8.

Comma issues. Should be 5:50 not 5.50pm.

Audi R8 driver was a 33-year-old man, and after the accident he was taken to a hospital with serious injuries but later was confirmed dead.

Disjointed sentence and missing the article. Missing articles are the sign of an ESL.

After the collision, Audi R8 landed upside down and the Porsche just drove away without even stopping.

Missing article. Poor sentence.

Anyone who lives in that area and/or has any information about the Porsche driver, contact the police urgently on 101.

What area? "Urgently" is another sign of an ESL.

Porsche driver has probably made a big mistake by leaving the crime scene, because when the police finds him, he?s gonna be in big trouble.

lmao, yep, ESL. Quality news. This sentence made me LOL Is this guy like 13??? hahahahaha

No information who is the causer of the collision. Maybe the Porsche driver wasn?t the causer and by leaving the crime scene, now, he looks like he is the causer. Or maybe he is the causer and it?s why he has run away?

lmao he just fell apart here. hahaha

 

[Conor]

Edit: Removed by request.

 

[archon10]

I'm still LOLing at the last part.

It almost looks like vandalism or the writer is a potato.