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Logo feedback!

Discussion in 'Graphic Design' started by warriorkreatives, Nov 8, 2014.

  1. warriorkreatives

    warriorkreatives Junior Member

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    If you are the owner of this logo - which one will you choose?

    Also - do you have any idea how to improve this concept?

    Thanks!
     
  2. hatblackguy

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    The third one looks better than the others, maybe putting a subheading underneath will make it look complete...
     
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    Agree with hatblackguy. 3rd one is the better one for me.

    Actually i like the 1st one better but because the 3rd one has a laptop i prefer that.
     
  4. warriorkreatives

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    Thank you so much for dropping by your time on this thread! It means me a lot.

    Hoping for more feedback though to improve this concept, as the client was to picky :spankme:
     
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    The third one looks like a 9yo did it.. Obviously the first one is the best out of those 3..
     
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    Designers usually add those colored gradient backgrounds to make the logo pop up so it looks attractive. It's kinda an illusion. Unless your site theme uses the same background, I'd suggest you to try placing them on a white background or whatever theme your site have so you get the "real" picture of what kind of impression it makes to your visitors.

    The fonts you use on the logos should define the message it's trying to convey to the visitors. For ex, the font on the 2nd logo makes the "$" symbol look more credible than the other two. The same goes for the colors as well. You gotta highlight the "Month" as well like some covered rectangular box behind the words "Month Online".

    Most importantly, None of the above suggestions apply if you're gonna sell a WSO on WF.
     
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    first one looks great - try carbon background
     
  8. davain

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    I like the first one but I think the 3rd one has me hooked because of the laptop, no other reason.

    2nd one is just out of the picture.

    I don't really have any suggestions except maybe change the color of the laptop screen's background?

    I can't tell you what would look better but I feel like there is a better color gradient you could use.
     
  9. davain

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    I was already picturing the logos without the gradient background but he is right, when you're presenting the logo to the client you should use a white background or the background of their already existing site.

    I would like to see how the third one looks with the box around "Money Online" too

     
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    warriorkreatives Junior Member

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    Thank you so much for all of your feedback!

    Client like the version 2 of the logo as attached :cool:
    30kamonth-logo.jpg
     
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    I think the first one is better. It's rememberable and looks trustworthy. The third one is overworked idea
     
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    But the my client chose the 2nd option as attached above post.

    Thanks for your feedback!

    -WK

     
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    How can contact a client to create a logo?
     
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    for me it nice please give me a feedback to when i post a logo in this thread :)
     
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    It seems simple and not too colorized... I like that better too...
    Cheers
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    I would pick the one on the top or bottom if you ask me. The middle one seems to cliche if you ask me.
     
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    Including the backgrounds in this image, i'm siding with the second logo. The color difference between the black/tan and the gold, black, and silver makes it pop over the blue and blue in the first logo. The third logo, i'm not digging the font color or the laptop.

    for color, the first image is white lettering and a orangish color behind the $30K. doesnt really subliminally relate to money in my eyes. second logo has both gold and silver, both being related to money. The black behind the gold makes it pop out. The third logo looks like white and bronze, with bronze being like the penny. doesnt bring the idea of big money to mind for me. those are my reasons for going with the second one.
     
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    bottom one looks too basic and obvious, top one looks like a football league logo or something, middle one looks really good - crisp and conveys the message without being obvious.
     
  19. Build Online Brand

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    I like the 1st one among all three - looks solid.
     
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    I like the first one best