I'm introducing my product to the internet.

Discussion in 'Making Money' started by stayacedeep, Jan 27, 2012.

  1. stayacedeep

    stayacedeep Newbie

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    I would first like to introduce myself, as a young entrepreneur. Nice to meet you all with all sincerity.

    I have a decent local product on the market offline and I recently added it to the online world. my website is "smartdrugsforthought"

    I'm wondering if I need to shapen this up a little bit to have more sales or conversions. Better yet more traffic. Any ideas are great and respected. :)
     
  2. wanfirdaus

    wanfirdaus Regular Member

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    The testimonial comments looks fake.

    Its a brand new site isn't it? Is the products FDA approved?
    Better add video testimonials.

    Put 5 bullet points why the heck should people buy your products.

    Come on, you're a young entrepreneur aren't you? :rolleyes:

    You can do better than that. Tweak the design and think about the traffic later.
     
  3. FreashCoast

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    Get a real designer to at least you can try and do a better job at faking it...
    decent concept for a product thou
     
  4. johndoejohndoe

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    It's a decent looking site, but I would at least suggest getting a professional logo.
     
  5. stayacedeep

    stayacedeep Newbie

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    Any suggestions on tweaking the design?? Well to be honest all of these comments but 1 are actually real haha. I'm thinking of tweaking those as well. The product is not FDA approved either. :confused:

    I'm on it bro, I have a designer on this tomorrow. Any suggestions on doing a better job at faking it though? :confused:



    Hey guys thanks for all of the input, I do appreciate the time you spent to post on this thread. I will keep all of you updated.

    Btw, a testimonial video is in the roughdraft right now and we have been using backlink techniques(forums, blogs, pr, ebay, and social media)

    Edit: I'm really starting to decide if I should delete all of the testimonial comments on the website.
     
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