I'm introducing my product to the internet.

[stayacedeep]

I would first like to introduce myself, as a young entrepreneur. Nice to meet you all with all sincerity.

I have a decent local product on the market offline and I recently added it to the online world. my website is "smartdrugsforthought"

I'm wondering if I need to shapen this up a little bit to have more sales or conversions. Better yet more traffic. Any ideas are great and respected.

 

[wanfirdaus]

The testimonial comments looks fake.

Its a brand new site isn't it? Is the products FDA approved?
Better add video testimonials.

Put 5 bullet points why the heck should people buy your products.

Come on, you're a young entrepreneur aren't you?

You can do better than that. Tweak the design and think about the traffic later.

 

[FreashCoast]

Get a real designer to at least you can try and do a better job at faking it...
decent concept for a product thou

 

[johndoejohndoe]

Get a real designer to at least you can try and do a better job at faking it...
decent concept for a product thou

It's a decent looking site, but I would at least suggest getting a professional logo.

 

[stayacedeep]

The testimonial comments looks fake.

Its a brand new site isn't it? Is the products FDA approved?
Better add video testimonials.

Put 5 bullet points why the heck should people buy your products.

Come on, you're a young entrepreneur aren't you?

You can do better than that. Tweak the design and think about the traffic later.

Any suggestions on tweaking the design?? Well to be honest all of these comments but 1 are actually real haha. I'm thinking of tweaking those as well. The product is not FDA approved either.

Get a real designer to at least you can try and do a better job at faking it...
decent concept for a product thou

I'm on it bro, I have a designer on this tomorrow. Any suggestions on doing a better job at faking it though?



Hey guys thanks for all of the input, I do appreciate the time you spent to post on this thread. I will keep all of you updated.

Btw, a testimonial video is in the roughdraft right now and we have been using backlink techniques(forums, blogs, pr, ebay, and social media)

Edit: I'm really starting to decide if I should delete all of the testimonial comments on the website.