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I will launch a new website! ultimategurupack.com

Discussion in 'Membership Sites' started by diegomenezes, Sep 22, 2009.

  1. diegomenezes

    diegomenezes Newbie

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    Hello there.

    Here is my new project website.
    http://www.ultimategurupack.com

    Please read the sales page and tell me what you think!
    I need to modify everything now, even sink the idea if it is not good.

    Please I wanna advices
    Thanks BHW
     
  2. qesire

    qesire Newbie

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    Hello,
    I see that English may not be your first language.
    Get a proofreader fast,the price seems kinda high as well.
     
  3. squiffy

    squiffy Newbie

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    200 websites a month would be far too much for a mere mortal to handle I think. Surely you would run out of niches after a couple of months. Plus you'd need $600 a month just for domain names alone ( assuming $2.99 .info )

    Provide 5 a month and set it at $47 or something, make it more realistic for the average joe.
     
  4. diegomenezes

    diegomenezes Newbie

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    Hello there.

    First of all, thanks for replying me!

    @gesire: I will ask for a copywriter to review the text before launching the project, I need to ask $147, because I will pay, $47 to affiliates and will earn $100, with that money I need to make a unique website for each member. But now I am thinking in changing the project.

    @squiffy: Hi! The 200 websites is distributed to the 200 members, so each one will receive just one monthly! But will receive a unique content website. I was not pretending to register domains, just give the files to them. I think I will make just like membershipdominators.com, create 5 websites monthly for example, and everybody will just need to rewrite the articles. So that way I can ask for $47.
     
  5. niche1

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    I would change the first part of your site to something that solves the problem. In the opening, try this: Who else wants an easy hands-off solution to making money on the internet?

    THAT should be the "hook" or the first part of the AIDA: Attention, Interest, Desire, Action.

    Then, follow up with how you can provide the solution. Which you have to a point, but you kind of reversed it.

    No matter what some may say, the formula for sales copy stays pretty much the same.

    Watch the countless (very expensive) ads on tv. They work. If they did not, the companies could not afford to spend the money on them.

    Interesting idea, but you need to change your copy on the main page. You have the right idea, but I would put some of the bullet points at the beginning of the copy.

    Like this flow: Here is your problem---->Here is our solution to your problem------>Here are our features and benefits of our solution to your problem------>and so on......

    Make your sales page pretty much like the others that convert really well. I would look at some of the top sellers (the big dogs) and see how their copy is written.

    Copy their copy. Change it to meet your needs.

    Something to consider..........whoever writes articles for that many sites will have to be quick. AND, someone will must edit them.

    I am editing articles right now for my membership site and it takes a LOT of time.

    Some things to consider. I hope that I have been helpful.
     
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  6. diegomenezes

    diegomenezes Newbie

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    niche1:
    Man! Really thanks!

    I will use a Black Hat Method to get all the articles 100% copyscaped.
    100% english writtened. And totally free.
    That´s why I can make a lot of websites monthly.

    I will change my sales letter. Thanks again =)