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Discussion in 'Graphic Design' started by goodboy133, Nov 16, 2012.

  1. goodboy133

    goodboy133 Regular Member

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    Some of my first photoshop works.
    Any criticism is appreciated!
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  2. gullsinn

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    Great mate, keep it up :)
     
  3. opiates

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    Thank you very much, Good keep it to continue.
     
  4. Klayne

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    It's goo, I like it, after a bit of more learning you will make money with designing.
     
  5. shockrock

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    Looks pretty good, check out some tutorials. They helped me a lot over time.
     
  6. StevenJones

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    Great stuff. Though I think you should put a bit more effort on text in the banner.. My cents just giving you my insight! :p
     
  7. zarrakdesigner

    zarrakdesigner Power Member

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    Hmmmm Great Progress
     
  8. rkt13

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    I can still see the watermark from the stock photo you copied


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  9. StevenJones

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    Thought he added that himself.. Would be something if he didn't :p
     
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    Looks like you grabbed an existing logo and changed the text.
     
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    nice!
     
  12. YTMusicNetwork

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    Nice logo, but just like you said yourself, The text in the logo could use some extra work.
    But after all, great designing !
     
  13. Blackberry_11

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    Nice job ,
    pretty nice and cool ,
    hello will you share your resource ?
    if so it will be better for me and I can give you a special and warm thanks.
     
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    Why is some watermark in the backgroun? Looks like it doesn't belongs there. Also the black background at the bottom and the right site looks like from MS paint, very poor quality - you can see a big pixels there.
    And the letter "S" in word "Gamers" looks deformed.
     
  15. Kaiser_Soze

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    The shadow or whatever it is behind the ball is somewhat strange. The font and its color are not quite fitting in the picture too, IMO.
     
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    you have done a really nice work mate.. Good luck and keep up with the work.
     
  17. rubberducky

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    I would tighten up the edges on the banner - specifically the left side edge - it looks very jagged and like you just tried to get the background removed without paying attention to how it was removing part of the actual image.
     
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    Seems amazing considering first design! Try working more on clarity of pixels.
     
  19. chamara

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    there is good and bad always. As per my view it is a pretty good design if you are a newbie to PS.
     
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    wow ! great looks good which you're use?