[HELP] I Need Someone To Check My Funnel/Email Sequence

Hi, I want to someone experienced in Email Marketing to go through my funnel/Email sequence and see if the funnel is good, or need correction (your advice/opinion).

It Is In The Dog Training Niche.

It Goes Like This;

Optin>>>>Delivering Free Ebook And Promising More Free Tips Tomorrow>>>>Delivering Free Tips And Telling That Tomorrow's Email Will Help More >>>>> Promoting The Affiliate Offer Like A Recommendation>>>>>Using Swipes From JV Page>>>>>Using Swipes From JV Page>>>>>Final Reminder..

Please Let me know in the thread if you are willing to help, i will send the funnel in DOC Format To You And See If My Pitching Is Correct.

Thank You In Advance.