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He didnt like my email :(

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by Toolboy, May 7, 2011.

  1. Toolboy

    Toolboy Registered Member

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    So I sent an offer to some hotels off a random list, but this one guy was not very grateful for my offer of help.

    Just thought I would share as its a pretty funny response.

    His website is some kind of gay retreat where guys can walk around naked.



     
  2. zmoney

    zmoney Senior Member

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    Sign his butt up for some enhancement emails :)
     
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  3. soyafan

    soyafan Junior Member

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    May be he is already paying lot of $$$ to some other IMer to take care of his site.Anyways it is a numbers game.You ask hundred people and some reply in affirmative.

    As long as they don't complain for spamming you shouldn't worry about one or two angry rant emails
     
  4. oxonbeef

    oxonbeef BANNED BANNED

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    Take note of what he said he's giving you some advice.
    I would love to see your email.
     
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  5. Toolboy

    Toolboy Registered Member

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    Yeah for sure I have taken it on board, its the first send so I fully intend on trying another completely different copy and seeing how that one goes.

    Oxon I would love to pm you the email if you will give me a few pointers and promise not to make a thread about how bad I am at writing emails
     
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    Abstroose Elite Member

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    Exactly what I thought.

    Perhaps you should post your email here so we can review it. :)
     
  7. Maruk

    Maruk Power Member

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    Well, I don't think you are very grateful to his help to you.
    He clearly states that your offer looks spammy.
    And if your email is 2 pages long I can't disagree. Those are the first I delete without even reading them.

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    What the dudes above me said :p
     
  8. Toolboy

    Toolboy Registered Member

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    haha i could be more grateful you are right
    it was a very long email, i used this 12 step sales letter formula that i found, i guess the downside is it creates long letters.

    But this is all about trying different letters and see what gets the best response? - I wont know for a while yet, this could prove to be more effective than a short sharp letter