first ever squeeze page

I'm trying to sell e-cigs, btw. It's Smoke Without Fear. I personally use e-cigs and I feel better. No carcinogens. No cough. So that's my angle. It's just... how to best advertise it and hook the reader. That's where the dilemma arises.

That download now button under ecover is misleading..
I think it's better to have optin form below your message or on either side.

You might want to try making your squeeze page similar to this:

I bet they've tested this template.

Looks clean and nice.

vsaxena said:

I'm trying to sell e-cigs, btw. It's Smoke Without Fear. I personally use e-cigs and I feel better. No carcinogens. No cough. So that's my angle. It's just... how to best advertise it and hook the reader. That's where the dilemma arises.

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Great, the title/domain name works for the e-cig thing, but not an ebook about quitting smoking completely. The concept you want to use and hook the reader is for those who want to quit but aren't mentally ready for the commitment it takes. There's other benefits too... the ability to "smoke" in public places again, for example, is a major selling point. But that's not relevant to the e-book you're promoting on this squeeze page.

I agree with removing the download button. So far I've only commented on content because that's my turf, but visually I don't like the download button (especially if it's not going to work) and the flashing arrows is kind of tacky. This could be much classier... but it's a good start.

Yeah sorry about the button. Stupid template, lol.

Question.. what do you think about this eBook title?

The Electronic Cigarette Revolution: How It Works And Why You Need To Jump On The Bandwagon

or

Smoke Without Fear: Smoke Electronic Cigarettes And Say Bye To ..... ?? (shrugs)

Hmm... not loving either of them to be honest

It functions as is, but you really don't have a solid short hook for them to take action. Also, if you could pull in some benefits in small short crisp informative style then yes it can work. Right now, I think you merely only lack a very small number of tweaks to make it a high converting page. Could honestly be better than most CPA landers out there.

the fact that there is a download now and an email optin confuse me? why not just have them optin and send them the download

Good job! I am right where you are now & writing my book getting ready to put everything together. If that is an opt-in squeeze page, do you email them the book or do you have an Auto response with it?

Your benefits don't include WEIGHT GAIN. Most people I know have gained 15-20 pounds pretty quickly. I would attribute E-cigs to not blowing up.

Looks good to me, then again I never done a squeeze page so I wouldn't know.

Looks pretty simple and clean. You can try adding some more graphics to add some more charm to it.