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English this sentence is ok?

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by Devilfish1688, Sep 19, 2016.

  1. Devilfish1688

    Devilfish1688 Senior Member

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    For the full information & more reviews,

    some claim is ok

    some claim drop " the "

    my english not say good for my review

    I all put this " For the full information & more reviews, "

    should be ok?
     
  2. blogzandstuff

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    Right words just wrong order
     
  3. mickyfu

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    I would personally drop the "the".
     
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  4. Devilfish1688

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    gee wonder will affect my site, I already input this in many page ...feel hassle to edit all.
     
  5. BassTrackerBoats

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    I'd probably change this: For the full information & more reviews,

    To this: To get a more complete view and to see even more reviews,
     
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  6. mickyfu

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    It makes no difference either way round. I just personally would not use "the". I am pretty sure it is correct either way.
     
  7. Devilfish1688

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    so like this?
    To get a more complete view and to see even more reviews, please find on: your website.com
     
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  8. Devilfish1688

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    guys how about this?

    "
    For More Information or to Buy, Check Out Clubbell Yoga Primal 12 At " this one should be ok? for another way to direct visitors to another site.
     
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    Same here.
    I guess either way is grammatically correct, but personally I would drop the The as well.
     
  10. W9go

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    same here drop the "the" and you should be good
     
  11. sexyonion

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    It's grammatically correct but I don't think a native English speaker wouldn't put the "the" in it. I'd be inclined to write "For more information" rather than "For full information" but that might just be me.
     
  12. islandman1010

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    For more information and reviews go to ................
     
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  13. Devilfish1688

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    ok thanks guys
     
  14. Conor

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    Get reviews and more information at: your website.com
     
  15. Devilfish1688

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    how about this? the next one? should be ok?

    "
    For More Information or to Buy, Check Out Clubbell Yoga Primal 12 At
    "
     
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    Drop the "or to Buy" part. It makes it too long.

    For more information, check out Clubbell Yoga Primal 12, at:
     
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    It's legible, but kinda clear that it's either translated, or low-level ESL. Keep it up though, I've been having the same troubles with spanish, your on the right track!
     
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    I would consider BTB's version.
     
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