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Does This Loan Site Look Good?

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by MASSEY, Jan 11, 2013.

  1. MASSEY

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    Does it look good or would you say it is lacking in sex appeal. I am considering using this site to funnel a few thousand visitors a month to but i am unsure whether it is READY. I think it is nearly ready in my opinion because alot of loan sites on the web look like junk to me. But i might be biased about my own site. Check it and tell me what you think.... http://www.paydayloaninuk.org.uk

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  2. TheRealRazzy

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    Looks a little out of date to me.

    Look up some web designs that are trending and alter your site a bit. Just be sure to keep it user friendly and funnel the traffic to your offers ;)


    And I kept going back to that waving smiley face... couldn't read anything. Even though it's cute and nice, take it off the site.

    That's just my opinion.
     
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    looks good but needs a stronger call to action. Also the guy pointing down doesnt seem too professional. otherwise nice website.
     
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    Very bland and untrustworthy looking... new template
     
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    It may have sex appeal I am not qualified to assess that...

    Bearing in mind what has sex got to do with a pay day loan - Oh silly me folks want money to pay for sex...

    That guy on the site pointing down looks like a very dodgy character... totally unprofessional...
     
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    Alot of HTML5 nice!
     
  7. MASSEY

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    The trouble is, so many loans sites on the web look the same. I was hoping to go simple but effective and maybe stand out that way.

    Back to the kitchen i guess.
     
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    Anyone have examples of what they think is a relatively 'good' looking loans site?
     
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    paydayuk.co.uk

    Still tacky but if your target market is nanny state handout folks and trailer trash et al then you have to keep it simple
     
  10. shadowwalker

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    I am not saying this to be mean just giving my opinion but also change the font style its hard on the eyes. I also own a web development firm so I am very picky about layouts and design.
     
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    yeah the call to action is nearly invisible
    the bottom half of front page is text heavy, maybe try some bullet points and graphics to cut down on text

    No expert, but that's what pops into mind
     
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    I wouldn't hit that..

    Now to make this constructive..

    I don't like the domain. Seems tacky, you have to balance EMD with Brand. You have the EMD, but no brand. It'd be more appealing if you branded the domain vs using EMD in this scenario. Maybe something like: "Brand"Loans.com.

    The homepage is not captivating, seems like there's too much to read. Overwhelming.

    I'm very picky when it comes to design, this doesn't seem to work for me. Compare with any other site in a relative category:
    http://www.westernunion.com/Home

    -Hope this helps