Can i get some constructive criticism about my site please?

rah5013 said:

so, how does the conversion goes? i mean your earning after the change up?

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well i been getting hits to it definitely. so far no big sale with it. i will start changing my format though to try to get some earning power from it. hopefully it works out.

i think if the layout is top notch people will want to visit it more and more

I think the site looks great but at the very top the way the blue box kinda overshoots the links is annoying.

Focus on building some content for this site (I am assuming it is brand new) evryday and try and rank for some keywords and you will have yourself a nice little earner there!

Good luck!

blackma said:

I think the site looks great but at the very top the way the blue box kinda overshoots the links is annoying.

Focus on building some content for this site (I am assuming it is brand new) evryday and try and rank for some keywords and you will have yourself a nice little earner there!

Good luck!

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blue box overshooting the links? can you be more specific i am not sure what that means.


finding keywords in the fitness industry is pretty freakin hard these days

That site is for sale?

ok so i changed the nav bars to two different shades of gray and removed that red since it was just too much at one time, you can see in the upper right i am going to add a RSS feed button, facebook button, and twitter button and use a plugin to automate all of them somehow.

next i am moving down that News highlights on the right. What i want to do is use AWEBER to make an "Enter your name and email, click to download FREE ebook and signup for the newsletter" So i can build an email list to market to. I will hopefully add those emails to the facebook audience to build that up too.

Under that I'll keep the news highlights AKA the new interview section. Since I got that main slider I will use for the real good articles and highlights.

I removed that whole TAG box crap, it is just bad looking.

My next goal is to fix that search button I have in the main header with a layout change/color change there, so it isnt so out of place.

I took your advice and made it "top 50 supplements EVER!" hopefully that goes well.

I added 3 more posts since then with more images and such. I am going to change the CSS code i think to make it a RED-GRAY-BLUE type layout. The blue and gray will be used for primary site stuff so images really pop out. the red will be used for article titles so they really pop out as well.

I know im newbie but looks fantastic to me xD

I think the overall design is sweet. Not much you need to improve. Just little things like the "GO" in the search field might need a little clean up. The placement of things are great. I especially love the background. It goes well with the website.

Flyinturdnugget up in this mfer

Looking good, i like the logo design and the placement of the social icons....easily navigated.

I have noticed you dont have any keywords or discription though.

<meta name="description" content="" /> <meta name="keywords" content="" />

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Goodluck with the website!

Good job on bumping a 2 month old thread.

Check the dates before responding next time.

does it matter? his site is still live, clearly the guy still has problems SEO tags wise.

2 month old thread? few month old website and it still can be made better.

You dont build a website and leave it for a few years, if you do think that you know nothing about websites, in which case why are you reading this thread?lol

I really like the site and the name made me laugh Since you asked for constructive criticism, the first thing that popped into my head was that the wide news boxes seem a bit visually muddled, it's not obvious that the dark blue bars are actually part of the enclosing box, they look more like separators because they go right to the edge. Another thing, I guess, is that the site would feel more current and active if the news boxes had a date somewhere (even if it's fake). Maybe in the form "X days ago" or something similar.

Anyway, great job and best of luck with the site.

I don't think that red color is disturbing. It is going good with Blue Color with white Background.

Your site is looking very nice. I don't think there is any need to change the red colour.