Beginner graphic designer looking for feedback on my work

I created these 2 projects following a very small part of the briefs that were given to me by the academy I enrolled in (then I carried out the rest only thinking about my creativity) well I'm also looking for some harsh criticism from people much more competent than me.

What software did you use to draw and edit in? You like your mellow yellow?! lol

Its not too advanced but everything and anything that looks different from last weeks work, is an improvement, so don't stop keeping on, and if possible try to find your signature technique and look.

Its not too bad, its just a bit bad for the eyes, and contrasting everywhere on the can, and the same sort of principles for the cyber.

You can do better. But that will be next week and next month. Study some other examples, go look at a book in the library or something that has brand advertisement glossary over the years in film, and culture or something.

What counts is you enjoyed yourself, and your ready to try again. You should be your own best critic, as only you know the effort you put in and level of expertise you really have.

I like the direction you're taking. Being open to harsh but constructive feedback is one of the best ways to grow as a designer. You've got a solid creative foundation here. Keep experimenting, study the details and the improvement will come.

Ngl u got a solid design mindset n distinctive style, that personal identity in yer work really shows - but honestly u'd benefit from bein a bit more flexible n designin for a broader audience, rn it kinda feels like u're slappin the same signature style on every single project regardless of who it's actually for