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Amazing Conversion / Sales letter Concept Trial - Your Thoughts Please.....

Discussion in 'Copywriting & Sales Persuasion' started by benjarvie, Oct 27, 2012.

  1. benjarvie

    benjarvie Junior Member

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    Firstly please excuse the thread title.... Nothing ground breaking here i'm sure but...... I have you here reading and hopefully prepared to share your thoughts...


    Ok wont waste any more of your time.

    Niche: DIY electric cars

    Site type: Reviews on wordpress backend.

    Concept trial: Facebook page likes to be nested to each product suggestion to socially validate suggestion.

    Please refer to a screen shot of the top section on of lander.


    top of lander.gif



    If you look closely you will see where im thinking of imbedding the facebook plugin.....

    This page already converts well... but really want to tweak this page further....



    Refer to this pic for the second portion of my lander ( has email optin for newsletter/backend sales)

    2nd portion lander.gif


    Here is the 3rd portion of the letter reviewing the second product recommendation..... ( always had better results reviewing 2 products)

    You will also notice Adsense.

    3 rd portion lander.gif


    Lastly here is a sample of what the facebook plugin im thinking to use next to each product... each would have its own separate growing number of likes...

    example of facebook like.jpg


    Id appreciate you feedback on my site and appreciate if you can share your experience with such landers and mods that can be bolted onto what im doing here already...

    As stated previously - the site does convert but there is always room for improvement.



    Thanks people for giving me 10 mins of your time...
     
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  2. benjarvie

    benjarvie Junior Member

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    Ill be provisioning this change today and keep you all updated with my progress....

    any suggestions as to where to buy facebook page likes so we can inflate some numbers for each product ?
     
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    I buy them on fiverr
     
  4. benjarvie

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    ok likes are on there way... so lets see what happens over the comming weeks re conversions ....


    Stay tuned...
     
  5. benjarvie

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    i stay away from there mate... they have slammed all my accounts as i started a fiverr site of my own :) as soon as they smell my paypal accounts they disable my accounts and i have to dispute charges with paypal.... im using seoclerks...
     
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    amazing for information..

    Thanks...
     
  7. benjarvie

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    ok update - I have successfully had to likes inflated on both products on this review page.

    Product One has a couple thousand and product 2 has a couple hundred.

    Lets wait and see how this social proof impacts my conversion rate
     
  8. ExCluSiveG

    ExCluSiveG Junior Member

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    How did this experiment go? Did you see an increase in conversion?

    I tried something similar. I didn't see a huge difference and haven't bothered since.
     
  9. rMerejo

    rMerejo Newbie

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    Thank you for the info, i appreciate it.
     
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