My Not-So-Great Review
I asked Justin for 4x 700 articles. I specified this in the comment box before buying as:
1x 700 on The Health Benefits of a XXXX Diet
1x 700 on The Health Benefits of a YYYY Diet
1x 700 on The Health Benefits of a ZZZZ Diet
and 1x 700 on The Health Benefits of a AAAA Diet
I ended up receiving 4x 700 word articles, but it wasn't really what I asked for. It was 4 articles on the same topic (the "health" benefits of all the diets together). It says in the OP that the information is
well researched, but I don't really see any research in here besides maybe 5 minutes of Google. It promises that there will be
no grammar errors, but I believe I have quite a number of them -
was this even proofread?
2 out of the 4 keywords I gave him were used in some way in the article giving the article a KW density of
0.285% - is this what he meant by
keyword optimized content?
Anyway, all that being put aside, I e-mailed the person that sent me the articles. I didn't get a response so I PM'd him on the forums here. I asked for a refund because the instructions were not followed, TAT was over 4 days, and the articles didn't seem matching to his sales promises. He replied once telling me he is sorry that I'm not satisfied, but my order was fulfilled. Is this what he meant by
excellent customer service? Probably not. The
TAT says
1-4 days. but when it took over 4 days to receive my articles, he replied that he doesn't work on weekends. He says that it's mentioned in the thread. I wasn't aware I had to go digging through replies in a thread to find the
fine print of a service.
I've replied to his PM by asking to at least deliver the correct content, but I've had no reply. So, I decided to post my review.
These articles are completely useless to me - as they didn't follow the instructions, and don't show much research in them at all. I've used a few other services here at BHW and most of them aren't what they claim to be. Only a couple of them truly deliver good articles at a cheap price.
Yes, I do understand this is cheap. When you promise quality content for cheap, that's what you should deliver. I don't mind paying more for quality, but why spend more money than what's needed? I just wanted to give out a review from my experience, and show a sample of one of the articles that I received. I highlighted any mistakes or things that could be improved upon - commenting on each.
The health (Don't need a definite article here) is the top thing on anyone's list of priorities. As everyone knows that even with a light fever, one is in great discomfort and can't go about doing things the way they want to. So when it comes to more serious problems, the impact is going to be much worse. In order to make sure that one is in top shape, the key thing to look after is the kind of food that one eats. The right kind of diet is going to make sure that you are secured from the many of the health issues (Did you mean "many of the health issues"?) that people in general are now facing because of the food that they eat. As the saying goes, you are what you eat. (Repetition in the phrasing of words)
A simple comparison with the health of our elders should be enough to give a clear picture of what is being done wrong. At our age they were much more active and in better shape compared to us. Aside from this fact even when their overall health is judged given their age and all to us, they are still quite better off compared to what our generation is going through. In order to improve this situation the solution lies in the fact that the food intake habits need to be improved.
What the majority of the people are eating these days can be easily considered as junk. There should be no surprises as to what the body goes through and the problems that one faces when the input is nothing but junk food. Shifting to a healthy diet has a lot of positive results and this is not only with reference to any one particular aspect of one's life. When you start eating healthy, you'll feel the overall positive impact that is going to take place. This is going to be an inherent feeling and then it is going to show on the outsides as well.
The list of what is considered to be healthy food is very long, especially if it is taken by every food item. An easier way is to make groups in general so that recognizing them and then identifying them is going to be pretty easy. One of the key group (I thought we were talking about a plural amount here, so "groups" would be grammatically correct) here is that of vegetables. Another is the Paleolithic diet. (When did this turn into a food group?) The foods that come under this category are commonly known as the caveman's food or diet. (When did a diet become a type of food?) One might be wondering as to how those are considered healthy. Well the simple answer is that because these are the natural foods that have been consumed by (Do you mean for?) generations. Even today with all that junk we are eating the same foods, the only difference is that we are adding too many artificial ingredients in them. The result is that the nutrients are killed and one is not getting them the way nature has meant it to be.
When it comes to vegetables or whole food, the key factor that is going to determine if the nutrients that the food requires are there or not, is the way that these things are produced. Here the factor or (Did you mean of?) organic growth comes in. Given the focus on large scale production system (Did you mean systems?), the producers who are running giant facilities, have taken up artificial ingredients, feeds etc to speed up the process of production and to increase the size of the production as well (Phew! Glad I got through that sentence); be it the greens and other vegetables or the livestock. This is where the whole problem arises. The best nutrients that one is going to get from the food one eats are going to be available when the food is produced in a natural manner, and it is given the time that is required by nature for its growth. The mere size and other outlook features of the food that is grown naturally and that is grown using artificial manners is a red alert for anyone who is bothered even a little bit. Even the tastes can be differentiated.
All in all it is suggested that, in order to ensure that you live a healthy life to the fullest it is very important that you take up a healthy food style including the things that have been mentioned here and taking out all that junk food from your system.
All in all I am pretty
unhappy with this service as what I ordered was not actually delivered. The content is usable for Web 2.0's (given if you receive what you asked for), but he doesn't deliver on the perfect grammar he was talking about.
