Headline? Which is Better?

[FlirtyFear]

That's funny, but jokes aside. I don't think any of these will work. In general the first one sounds better. But why don't you make your headline shorter? You can fall asleep before you finish to read just the headlines. The attention gets lost. Try to rephrase.

 

[planck]

That's funny, but jokes aside. I don't think any of these will work. In general the first one sounds better. But why don't you make your headline shorter? You can fall asleep before you finish to read just the headlines. The attention gets lost. Try to rephrase.

I have already provided several links to clickbank products that prove that long headlines and long copies always out-sell short copy.

Can you provide any counter-example which proves that short copy or short catchy headlines sell better?

Anyway thanks for your opinion. I hope you understand though, that your opinion is un-substantiated.

 

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[thescrrr]

A/B testing costs money... If i can by-pass that expenditure, I gladly will

not A/B testing will cost you more money on the long run.

 

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These are nice, catchy headlines that work on hard-print tabloids.
Do you have any proof that these headlines work online?

not A/B testing will cost you more money on the long run.

You are probably right.

Either way, I also have a VSL for this product; so, if the WSL (Written Sales Letter) is not converting for any affiliate, he can simply use the VSL.