[Your Opinion] About My Home Page

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Hello everyone hope you all are doing well!

I would like to ask you about your opinion on my website specifically Home Page.
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What would you improve?
To look more credible / eye catchy / convert sales

What about the content on home page is it bad, O.K. , good?
Any advices are welcomed.

Since this is my first website and i am doing almost all by myself please be patient with me, thank you.

*Edit*
(slow loading will be soon improved)

Thank you all for your time,
have a great day!

Filipo
 
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looks good but the page size is 32MB, its HUUUUUUUGE, way too much
 
Takes too long to load. Looks very good, do you have any sales yet?
 
looks good but the page size is 32MB, its HUUUUUUUGE, way too much
Okay thank you, i will reduce the size.

Takes too long to load. Looks very good, do you have any sales yet?
With the loading i am working on,
Thank you,
about the sales not yet since i am still trying to make my site.
 
As a potential customer, I would've clicked away the first 20 secs the page took to load (it took around a minute in total).
 
As a potential customer, I would've clicked away the first 20 secs the page took to load (it took around a minute in total).
About the slow loading, i am working on it, thank you for your reply.
 
What is this loading times on PC :P btw the mobile version needs a lot of work on some elements...
 
You must have changed something. Loaded for me in a second.
I would change the color of your menu, so don't use white.
Many times I can't see your menu due to the images in your header.
 
Alos when scrolling down the phones with the white background on your sites white background is way to white for my eyes. I would give your site a different background color.
 
The page is beautiful imho, but the loading takes too long and one more thing I noticed, although not sure if it's an issue, but it does tick me is this home and + overlap ( image below )

https://imgur.com/CWvvb8s
 
What is this loading times on PC :p btw the mobile version needs a lot of work on some elements...
I've been focusing now only on the desktop version.
For the speed, i am working on it.
thank you for your time sir.

You must have changed something. Loaded for me in a second.
I would change the color of your menu, so don't use white.
Many times I can't see your menu due to the images in your header.
I see, thank you for your opinion i will consider changing the background.

Alos when scrolling down the phones with the white background on your sites white background is way to white for my eyes. I would give your site a different background color.
Thank you for your opinion i will consider changing the backgroung.

The page is beautiful imho, but the loading takes too long and one more thing I noticed, although not sure if it's an issue, but it does tick me is this home and + overlap ( image below )

https://imgur.com/CWvvb8s
Was it on desktop or mobile version?

Website takes around ~25 sec to load on my end, you need to optimize it, even 10 sec is to much, from experience visitors don't want to wait more than 5-6 sec and you can loose potential customers.
Example : https://www.greatinsta.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/12/iphone_therock_mensi.png takes 15 sec to load or https://www.greatinsta.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/11/iphonex_nike.png takes ~19 sec
There are many free tools online to check what is causing such load time on your website.
I know about the slow loading, i am going to improve that ASAP
The goal is to make the page load within 1 - 3 sec max.
 
save those instagram pictures as jpg format or atleast resize them.
you can search "image optimizer" or use photoshop to optimize your images, under menu File / Export
 
save those instagram pictures as jpg format or atleast resize them.
you can search "image optimizer" or use photoshop to optimize your images, under menu File / Export
Thank you for your advice. i will check it out!
 
Hello everyone hope you all are doing well!

I would like to ask you about your opinion on my website specifically Home Page.
https://www.greatinsta.com

What would you improve?
To look more credible / eye catchy / convert sales

What about the content on home page is it bad, O.K. , good?
Any advices are welcomed.

Since this is my first website and i am doing almost all by myself please be patient with me, thank you.

*Edit*
(slow loading will be soon improved)

Thank you all for your time,
have a great day!

Filipo
The graphics are ok, although the logo is too small.

The Headline is too wishy washy/vanilla.

There's not a main idea projected to an ideal customer and there is not a CLEAR CTA.

The big image of the phone has the Instagram profile, I don't think it's vey persuasive. I'd include some results of your previous customers.

I'd review the whole sales copy and structure that main page as a sales letter/page.

You need to communicate your promise better to sell and convince, otherwise you risk to look like all the other IG agencies, you don't want that..
 
The graphics are ok, although the logo is too small.

The Headline is too wishy washy/vanilla.

There's not a main idea projected to an ideal customer and there is not a CLEAR CTA.

The big image of the phone has the Instagram profile, I don't think it's vey persuasive. I'd include some results of your previous customers.

I'd review the whole sales copy and structure that main page as a sales letter/page.

You need to communicate your promise better to sell and convince, otherwise you risk to look like all the other IG agencies, you don't want that..
Thank you very much for detailed information, i really appreciate, i am going to implement your ideas!

About the headline do you mean like it should be different? (my english is not native, altough i am trying my best but i don't know these similies)

About the “Big image of the phone...” should i use something like before and after?
 
It looks good, but it's slow. The content is not benefit driven enough.
 
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