I made a lil track :)

[Entriquit]

My first ever song.

All sounds made in fl studio12

thoughts?

 

[qubertisonpoint]

40 seconds in...
That's actually pretty nice!

 

[savobaby]

I made a beat too, using Logic Pro X, I'm more into hip hop/rap production though!

 

[Deleted member 877043]

My first ever song.

All sounds made in fl studio12

thoughts?

Nice theme, good soundpallete, but have another look at your mix. Individual tracks (stems) could be levelled better.

And have a listen at the low frequencies. Some of them are overlapping a bit, which in turn let’s the track “rumble”. Not much, but still noticable.

Also check out the change in volume over the whole duration, a bit to big of a contrast for my taste.

Overall a good job. Keep it up!