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[burukutuk]

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The amazing Jugular foramen anatomy

The human body is both mysterious and mighty with all the incredible details that are still to be discovered. It is really amazing to witness how the small and big parts of the human body keep on working in total harmony and in synchronization in order to perform the right procedures and processes that ensure our survival. The human brain in particular is an incredible piece of art. The amount of data and information processed through the brain every day is beyond imagination. The skull is made to protect this amazing organ and the Jugular foramen anatomy is designed to take part in the protection process. In this article we will discuss this body part, what it does and why it is incredible.

What is the Jugular foramen?

The brain is protected by the skull but is connected to the rest of the body through a complicated network of veins and nerves. The nerves transmit the electric signals from the brain to the different parts of the body and vice versa. These send messages from the body to the different parts and organs to function. The veins carry the blood from and to the brain. This blood contains oxygen and nutrients that will help the brain work. In order for these veins to pass through, they go through the Jugular foramen which is a hole in the skull.

Where does the Jugular foramen lie?

This is a big foramen or aperture that lies at the bottom of the human skull. It is located between the petrous temporal bone and the occipital bone and it is the only opening there. Its size is usually larger on the right side than on the left side. It is located behind that carotid canal. Important veins pass through the Jugular foramen and are essential for the proper performance of the brain.

What is the Jugular foramen anatomy?

The Jugular foramen anatomy is divided into 3 main parts:

1. The anterior part: This transmits the inferior petrosal sinus which mainly receives the auditory veins.

2. The intermediate part: This transmits the vagus and accessory nerves.

3. The posterior part: This transmits the sigmoid sinus which receives blood from the veins and transforms it to the brain.

The size of the Jugular foramen is variable and asymmetrical. But a normal one will appear well corticated in the bone scan. The study of the bone structure and not the size is what determines if there is a problem with the Jugular foramen anatomy.

What is the Jugular foramen syndrome?

This is a condition that affects the Jugular foramen anatomy and will cause lesions that affect several parts of the brain. When there is a tumor in the Jugular foramen or there is some type of abnormality, this will cause pressure on different parts of the veins that pass through which will affect the blood supply that comes out of or from the brain. This syndrome can be caused by glomus tumors in most cases. In other cases it is caused by meningioma which is a set of tumors that affect the different membranes that surround the central nervous system. While most of these tumors will cause no symptoms, sometimes they can affect the jugular foramen and can lead to serious symptoms. Shawannoma is a benign nerve tumor that also affects the jugular foramen. Trauma and infections can affect the jugular foramen and will lead to the symptoms related to the jugular foramen syndrome. Several bone diseases may alter its bone structure and will cause a pressure on the veins that pass through. This condition will have a lot of symptoms:

1. Dysphonia or hoarseness: This happens when a person’s voice unexpectedly changes or becomes very rough or harsh. Sometimes the person is unable to produce any voice at all.

2. Soft Palate: This is soft tissue that is located at the back of the mouth and contains no bones. It is composed of 5 different types of muscles that are involved in swallowing and breathing. A problem with the Jungular foramen can affect how the soft palate functions.

3. Deviation of the uvula: This is located next to and connected to the soft palate and its deviation can cause serious problems in the speech and swallowing as it is responsible for the production of thin saliva.

4. Loss of sensory function from the 1/3 posterior end of the tongue: This will cause problems in swallowing and speech.

5. Dysphagia and loss of gag reflex: Dysphagia is difficulty swallowing and is highly related to injuries and tumors in the jungular foramen. The loss of gag reflex and problems in that part of the mouth is another main symptom of problems in the jugular foramen.

6. The decreased function of the salivary glands: These lubricate the mouth and are essential in speech, swallowing and breathing.

7. Loss of hearing: Trauma and injuries to the jugular foramen will also result in loss of hearing.

 

[MisterF]

Interesting start; The human body is both mysterious and mighty with all the incredible details that are still to be discovered

What price are you paying for that?

I'll hold back on the gag reflex comments ( for now ).

 

[burukutuk]

Interesting start; The human body is both mysterious and mighty with all the incredible details that are still to be discovered

What price are you paying for that?

I'll hold back on the gag reflex comments ( for now ).

Its $7. What do you think of the quality from that article? Did it pass moneysite quality?

 

[Reaver]

Its $7. What do you think of the quality from that article? Did it pass moneysite quality?

No.

 

[burukutuk]

No.

Okay, that's the answer I need. Should firing my writer.

 

[Rai.]

I mean you did only paid $7.
But yeah I wouldn't put it on my money sites as well.

 

[burukutuk]

And what about this article i ordered from different writer. Did it pass moneysite quality?


Spinal cord cross section

We couldn’t walk and sit straight if it weren’t for our spinal cord. The spinal cord is not just a long set of vertebras connected together in a thin line that helps us stay straight, as it also consists in nervous tissue, which makes the connection between the brain and the body’s lumbar area. If we are to make a spinal cord cross section, we could see the bone marrow, spinal nerves and ganglions, the spinal cord itself, and the blood vessels surrounding this anatomic structure. Because it is so well innervated, injuries to the spinal cord are the worse. In severe cases, when the nerves are affected, spinal cord injuries can lead to partial or total paralysis.

· General details about the spinal cord

Let us imagine a spinal cord cross section in the human body, so we could have a better sight of the spinal cord. It begins in the occipital bone, which is a flat bone located in back side of the skull, in the lowest part, right above the line that marks the start of the neck. From here, the spinal cord descends through our back bone into the lumbar region of the body. The lumbar region is located between our rib cage and pelvis, and it contains a number of five vertebrae. The spinal cord stops between the first and second vertebrae of the lumbar section, not following the entire length of the vertebral column. The spinal cord is longer in the case of men, as they have approximately 45 cm or 18 inches, while women have approximately 43 cm or 17 inches. The bones of the vertebral column have the job of protecting the spinal cord, its length also depending on the height of a person.

· The function of the spinal cord

What is the purpose of the spinal cord in our body? Since it involves nerves, as you may have guessed, the spinal cord is a channel through which the brain transmits neural signals to the rest of the body. But, besides this, the spinal cord has neural circuits that are independent formations, being responsible of our reflexes and control our central pattern generators, which take care of some of our rhythmic motions. So, it is easy to understand that the spinal cord is essential for our general motion, for sending sensory information back to the brain, and for triggering a part of our reflexes. The blood vessels present in the area help the neurons by providing the energy they require to function properly and collect the waste produced by them so that the signals they transmit through the spinal cord to be clear.

The structure of the spinal cord is very complex; a spinal cord cross section needs to be magnified under a microscope to see the intricate connections between spinal nerves. In the scientific world, these nerves are known as mixed nerves, because the spinal cord contains both sensory neurons and motor neurons. We owe our movement and a good part of our sensory reactions to the spinal cord, an essential part of the human body.

 

[MisterF]

Its $7. What do you think of the quality from that article? Did it pass moneysite quality?

It depends on the quality of your moneysite, however @Reaver knows much more about writing than I do.

 

[Pinktoe]

What do you expect for $7?

Honestly, for $7, the article is pretty good

But if you want money site content, you paying $7 is the problem

 

[Sephrata]

In this article we will discuss this body part, what it does and why it is incredible.

I hate this with a vengeance. Even school kids should not include this in an extract.

 

[Reaver]

Okay, that's the answer I need. Should firing my writer.

Do what you want, but there is no way I'd put that content on my money site. Not even on the inner pages.

And what about this article i ordered from different writer. Did it pass moneysite quality?


Spinal cord cross section

We couldn’t walk and sit straight if it weren’t for our spinal cord. The spinal cord is not just a long set of vertebras connected together in a thin line that helps us stay straight, as it also consists in nervous tissue, which makes the connection between the brain and the body’s lumbar area. If we are to make a spinal cord cross section, we could see the bone marrow, spinal nerves and ganglions, the spinal cord itself, and the blood vessels surrounding this anatomic structure. Because it is so well innervated, injuries to the spinal cord are the worse. In severe cases, when the nerves are affected, spinal cord injuries can lead to partial or total paralysis.

· General details about the spinal cord

Let us imagine a spinal cord cross section in the human body, so we could have a better sight of the spinal cord. It begins in the occipital bone, which is a flat bone located in back side of the skull, in the lowest part, right above the line that marks the start of the neck. From here, the spinal cord descends through our back bone into the lumbar region of the body. The lumbar region is located between our rib cage and pelvis, and it contains a number of five vertebrae. The spinal cord stops between the first and second vertebrae of the lumbar section, not following the entire length of the vertebral column. The spinal cord is longer in the case of men, as they have approximately 45 cm or 18 inches, while women have approximately 43 cm or 17 inches. The bones of the vertebral column have the job of protecting the spinal cord, its length also depending on the height of a person.

· The function of the spinal cord

What is the purpose of the spinal cord in our body? Since it involves nerves, as you may have guessed, the spinal cord is a channel through which the brain transmits neural signals to the rest of the body. But, besides this, the spinal cord has neural circuits that are independent formations, being responsible of our reflexes and control our central pattern generators, which take care of some of our rhythmic motions. So, it is easy to understand that the spinal cord is essential for our general motion, for sending sensory information back to the brain, and for triggering a part of our reflexes. The blood vessels present in the area help the neurons by providing the energy they require to function properly and collect the waste produced by them so that the signals they transmit through the spinal cord to be clear.

The structure of the spinal cord is very complex; a spinal cord cross section needs to be magnified under a microscope to see the intricate connections between spinal nerves. In the scientific world, these nerves are known as mixed nerves, because the spinal cord contains both sensory neurons and motor neurons. We owe our movement and a good part of our sensory reactions to the spinal cord, an essential part of the human body.

This is also shit.

These articles are far too wordy, without getting a point across. They end abruptly and they are not structured properly. Grammatically they fail, and they aren't in any type of logical order. They just list facts while trying to meet the required word count, which makes the articles awkward and hard to read.

Where are the sources? Where's the personality? It reads like a textbook.

I'd be bored to death if I were a visitor. I'd skip out on this tragedy after the first paragraph.

 

[burukutuk]

Thank you guys for your opinion, really appreciate it. Also, please help me review the second article i provided above.

 

[Sherb]

Its $7. What do you think of the quality from that article? Did it pass moneysite quality?

Absolutely not.

Here. Here is a rewrite of your first paragraph:

BEFORE

The human body is both mysterious and mighty with all the incredible details that are still to be discovered. It is really amazing to witness how the small and big parts of the human body keep on working in total harmony and in synchronization in order to perform the right procedures and processes that ensure our survival. The human brain in particular is an incredible piece of art. The amount of data and information processed through the brain every day is beyond imagination. The skull is made to protect this amazing organ and the Jugular foramen anatomy is designed to take part in the protection process. In this article we will discuss this body part, what it does and why it is incredible.

AFTER

The mystery of the human body is as fascinating as it is detailed. Witnessing how the various facets of the body work together to process neural requests and perform tasks is awe-inspiring. Particularly intriguing is the brain, the data center of the human body where billions of pieces of data are processed each second. The skull protects the brain, but the Jugular foramen is the real layer of security. Located in the base of the skull and behind the carotid canal, this aperture cradles the ninth, tenth and eleventh cranial nerves. But the jugular foramen is a multi-tasker, assisting and protecting in several ways. Let's dig in further:

Go from that.

 

[burukutuk]

Do what you want, but there is no way I'd put that content on my money site. Not even on the inner pages.



This is also shit.

Sir, can you please help me find good writer on BHW, I mean the thread link. Im not native so i can't decide which writer should i hire.

 

[burukutuk]

Absolutely not.

Here. Here is a rewrite of your first paragraph:

BEFORE

The human body is both mysterious and mighty with all the incredible details that are still to be discovered. It is really amazing to witness how the small and big parts of the human body keep on working in total harmony and in synchronization in order to perform the right procedures and processes that ensure our survival. The human brain in particular is an incredible piece of art. The amount of data and information processed through the brain every day is beyond imagination. The skull is made to protect this amazing organ and the Jugular foramen anatomy is designed to take part in the protection process. In this article we will discuss this body part, what it does and why it is incredible.

AFTER

The mystery of the human body is as fascinating as it is detailed. Witnessing how the various facets of the body work together to process neural requests and perform tasks is awe-inspiring. Particularly intriguing is the brain, the data center of the human body where billions of pieces of data are processed each second. The skull protects the brain, but the Jugular foramen is the real layer of security. Located in the base of the skull and behind the carotid canal, this aperture cradles the ninth, tenth and eleventh cranial nerves. But the jugular foramen is a multi-tasker, assisting and protecting in several ways. Let's dig in further:

Go from that.

Ah I see the difference. Your writing skill rocks. Do you also provide writing services?

 

[Sephrata]

What's your budget? Probably easier to start from there.

 

[MisterF]

Sir, can you please help me find good writer on BHW, I mean the thread link. Im not native so i can't decide which writer should i hire.

Reaver is female, she just doesn't pussyfoot around.

 

[Sherb]

Ah I see the difference. Your writing skill rocks. Do you also provide writing services?

I used to. But I charge a lot of money. I'll be bringing my content writing services back after New Year's in a big way. Save up and stay tuned, 'cause it ain't gonna be cheap!

Reaver is female, she just doesn't pussyfoot around.

Whoa there, watch your fuckin' language, Mister.

 

[BassTrackerBoats]

@burukutuk - if you want I can delete those articles so they don't end up on some autoblog or other nefarious place.

 

[burukutuk]

What's your budget? Probably easier to start from there.

Actually I can reduce the amount of article posted if the price higher. So my budget flexible.