You must fail before you Succeed #Ebay Rough draft

Hey guys i just wrote a rough draft of an ebook on selling on ebay and wanted to get some input!
Its still a little sloppy haven't added the pictures or screenshots or anything yet but I'm looking for mistakes and things i can add in to make it better!
Any Input will help! Just post below if you want a copy and i will PM you the link!
Thanks!

I could look over that for you; in my experience eBay books don't convert very well though. I had one published on Kindle and ended up pulling it as the sales weren't worth the time spent updating the book as eBay constantly changes the website.

I'm most likely not even going to sell this one, I'm just going to use it as a giveaway for beginners! and use it on squeeze pages! thank you! ill get you a copy!

eBay keeps changing, my friend did ebay ebooks for a bit, didn't work out too well for him. But good luck to you!