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Write a good sales letter with picture proof.

Discussion in 'Copywriting & Sales Persuasion' started by rockme12, Dec 20, 2012.

  1. rockme12

    rockme12 Regular Member

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    Hello guys, I recently embarked into the world of email marketing but I am still learning how to write good sales letters. I am basically writing down my follow ups and finally have gotten to where I get to make money. I lost weight in 2 weeks and have picture proof(I got more cut, it actually shows). I do not want this to go to waste, so I was hoping a professional can give me pointers to write a great sales letter around my weight loss. I will be promoting fat loss factor.

    Thank you,

    Tariq
     
  2. Yildiz

    Yildiz Regular Member

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    I would start by looking at other peoples methods of writing sales letters for your niche. It really shouldn't be hard finding one for weight loss! Best of luck
     
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  3. InTh3Moment

    InTh3Moment Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    To add to what Yildiz said, I would look specifically for the copy that makes you want to sign up! So many times people go into a "writing" mode or "selling" mode. Why not stay in "buyer" mode? You can then be in their shoes, so to speak, and have a better idea what will motivate them to give you their money. Just my 2 cents.
     
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    Monitor sales letters from people advertising over time. Usually if they are advertising on high priced keywords and continue to advertise they are converting customers. Take their sales letters and the top 3 and rewrite 3 versions similar to theirs. Then do some split testing to figure out which one gets the best conversion.
     
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