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Would Love Feedback On A Landing Page

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by staticrebelle, Nov 18, 2010.

  1. staticrebelle

    staticrebelle Newbie

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    Hey BH Masters :)

    I would love to solicit some feedback on a landing page I've just finished. Any comments would be greatly appreciated!

    Some specific questions I'd be really interested in are whether it seems too pitchy and whether there's enough content on the page to drive a sale.

    Code:
    beercollege.net/home-brewing-save-you-400-a-year/
    Oh and as a thank you to anyone who posts feedback, I'll give you $10 off on a kit if you want it :).


    Thank you!
     
  2. aReJay

    aReJay Power Member

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    Depends on what your trying to do exactly, if you want people to click on one of the CPA leads on the right it should work quite nicely.

    But no one will really know until you start running tests.

    -aReJay
     
  3. zippy83

    zippy83 Newbie

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    I'm getting a 404 :/
     
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    Nice!
    It works for me
     
  6. staticrebelle

    staticrebelle Newbie

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    Whoops! Still had the page set to private. Should be viewable now.
     
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    marc3777 Registered Member

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    It's not bad. For me personally, I would have a call to action a little sooner. Not a huge fan of having to scroll too far before I see it
     
  8. staticrebelle

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    Cool thanks for that! I was thinking of having a second order now button a little bit further up!

    Cheers