Hi,
I looked at your auction as well. The details are more numerous than necessary. I, too, love to provide the fullest, most complete overview of what my site (or whatever other product) has to offer and am long-winded. Despite that, in my experience most people are repelled by listings that have so much information.
Another strategy people use for selling is by starting the listing at a low, very attractive price- with the idea that many people will be drawn to it, interested, and bid or watch the auction, by the end driving it up the the price you wanted anyway. This doesn't always happen, but I can say that if someone is looking and they see a listing out of their price range, it immediately gets passed over versus the other- more favorable- outcome.
Flippa is not an as obvious of a solution as people, sometimes, think. Many sales are made there... but you also have many more people who are paying upfront to list, and do not sell. I listed 3 great niche domains at a fraction of the price that similar domains sold for on Flippa and also didn't make any sales there- and I know that what I have is in-demand. So, it's just a matter of what different people are looking for. Personally, I won't be back there to sell, ever. Too high upfront costs AND they want success fees.
There is a new website and domain auction site launching this week. It will have no listing fees and a single-digit success fee. I will be using that as soon as it opens. I, personally, wouldn't sell anywhere where I needed to invest money in selling- no matter what the site status, because viewership is still not a guarantee. Good luck.