Umm... Guys, your opinion is important...

jend_sudirman · Apr 10, 2011

Hi, guys...

Pardon me for asking a favor from you...

Long story short: My little brother wrote a song and decided to recorded it in his friend's home studio. He uploaded it on Mediafire and he needs comments or critiques.

Here's the virus total scan result:

Code:

File name:
Ubaid - Just A Little (demo).mp3
Submission date:
2011-04-10 14:06:01 (UTC)
Current status:
finished
Result:
0/ 41 (0.0%)

Antivirus 	Version 	Last Update 	Result
AhnLab-V3	2011.04.10.01	2011.04.10	-
AntiVir	7.11.6.19	2011.04.08	-
Antiy-AVL	2.0.3.7	2011.04.10	-
Avast	4.8.1351.0	2011.04.10	-
Avast5	5.0.677.0	2011.04.10	-
AVG	10.0.0.1190	2011.04.10	-
BitDefender	7.2	2011.04.10	-
CAT-QuickHeal	11.00	2011.04.10	-
ClamAV	0.97.0.0	2011.04.10	-
Commtouch	5.2.11.5	2011.04.06	-
Comodo	8291	2011.04.10	-
DrWeb	5.0.2.03300	2011.04.10	-
eSafe	7.0.17.0	2011.04.10	-
eTrust-Vet	36.1.8261	2011.04.08	-
F-Prot	4.6.2.117	2011.04.10	-
F-Secure	9.0.16440.0	2011.04.10	-
Fortinet	4.2.254.0	2011.04.09	-
GData	22	2011.04.10	-
Ikarus	T3.1.1.103.0	2011.04.10	-
Jiangmin	13.0.900	2011.04.09	-
K7AntiVirus	9.96.4347	2011.04.09	-
Kaspersky	7.0.0.125	2011.04.10	-
McAfee	5.400.0.1158	2011.04.10	-
McAfee-GW-Edition	2010.1C	2011.04.10	-
Microsoft	1.6702	2011.04.10	-
NOD32	6030	2011.04.10	-
Norman	6.07.07	2011.04.10	-
Panda	10.0.3.5	2011.04.10	-
PCTools	7.0.3.5	2011.04.07	-
Prevx	3.0	2011.04.10	-
Rising	23.52.06.03	2011.04.10	-
Sophos	4.64.0	2011.04.10	-
SUPERAntiSpyware	4.40.0.1006	2011.04.10	-
Symantec	20101.3.2.89	2011.04.10	-
TheHacker	6.7.0.1.171	2011.04.10	-
TrendMicro	9.200.0.1012	2011.04.10	-
TrendMicro-HouseCall	9.200.0.1012	2011.04.10	-
VBA32	3.12.14.3	2011.04.08	-
VIPRE	8976	2011.04.10	-
ViRobot	2011.4.9.4402	2011.04.10	-
VirusBuster	13.6.297.0	2011.04.10	-

Additional information
MD5   : dcc8e113a269171a66db17498fed3bbe
SHA1  : 93304e372ae44286ee2e011b5ee0c1a56f312669
SHA256: 1d6b54ca0354020581b7aface9ba3eeb98fe5d1b91a9973056d141d9fa9ec4bd

and here's the mediafire link:

Code:

http://www.mediafire.com/?9nx2mughl147xey

My thanks for your attention and comment.

Proxy Cake · Apr 10, 2011

Lyrics need MAJOR work. 'The skies all day, the stars all night and we will have the best night and day'. WTF is that shit haha. To be honest I really thought you were taking the piss out of emo songs. The dudes voice isnt bad. It's not good either. When he tries and goes high on the word fire is soooo bad.

With a bit of work he could potentially have a rip off style of Bright Eyes. Play more that 4 chords on the guitar too that shit was hell repetitive.

All in all it just needs a massive revamp. Keep working though and just realize that there are some notes you should stay away from

akhilesh · Apr 10, 2011

You need to make the last part "just a little shorter"....

jend_sudirman · Apr 11, 2011

facebookdude said:
Lyrics need MAJOR work. 'The skies all day, the stars all night and we will have the best night and day'. WTF is that shit haha. To be honest I really thought you were taking the piss out of emo songs. The dudes voice isnt bad. It's not good either. When he tries and goes high on the word fire is soooo bad.

With a bit of work he could potentially have a rip off style of Bright Eyes. Play more that 4 chords on the guitar too that shit was hell repetitive.

All in all it just needs a massive revamp. Keep working though and just realize that there are some notes you should stay away from

Thanks! yeah I have told him that too... okay I'll show him this thread so that he can understand what I meant.

akhilesh said:
You need to make the last part "just a little shorter"....

Lol. Exactly!

Umm... Guys, your opinion is important...

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