Hi, guys... Pardon me for asking a favor from you... Long story short: My little brother wrote a song and decided to recorded it in his friend's home studio. He uploaded it on Mediafire and he needs comments or critiques. Here's the virus total scan result: Code: File name: Ubaid - Just A Little (demo).mp3 Submission date: 2011-04-10 14:06:01 (UTC) Current status: finished Result: 0/ 41 (0.0%) Antivirus Version Last Update Result AhnLab-V3 2011.04.10.01 2011.04.10 - AntiVir 7.11.6.19 2011.04.08 - Antiy-AVL 2.0.3.7 2011.04.10 - Avast 4.8.1351.0 2011.04.10 - Avast5 5.0.677.0 2011.04.10 - AVG 10.0.0.1190 2011.04.10 - BitDefender 7.2 2011.04.10 - CAT-QuickHeal 11.00 2011.04.10 - ClamAV 0.97.0.0 2011.04.10 - Commtouch 5.2.11.5 2011.04.06 - Comodo 8291 2011.04.10 - DrWeb 5.0.2.03300 2011.04.10 - eSafe 7.0.17.0 2011.04.10 - eTrust-Vet 36.1.8261 2011.04.08 - F-Prot 4.6.2.117 2011.04.10 - F-Secure 9.0.16440.0 2011.04.10 - Fortinet 4.2.254.0 2011.04.09 - GData 22 2011.04.10 - Ikarus T3.1.1.103.0 2011.04.10 - Jiangmin 13.0.900 2011.04.09 - K7AntiVirus 9.96.4347 2011.04.09 - Kaspersky 7.0.0.125 2011.04.10 - McAfee 5.400.0.1158 2011.04.10 - McAfee-GW-Edition 2010.1C 2011.04.10 - Microsoft 1.6702 2011.04.10 - NOD32 6030 2011.04.10 - Norman 6.07.07 2011.04.10 - Panda 10.0.3.5 2011.04.10 - PCTools 7.0.3.5 2011.04.07 - Prevx 3.0 2011.04.10 - Rising 23.52.06.03 2011.04.10 - Sophos 4.64.0 2011.04.10 - SUPERAntiSpyware 4.40.0.1006 2011.04.10 - Symantec 20101.3.2.89 2011.04.10 - TheHacker 6.7.0.1.171 2011.04.10 - TrendMicro 9.200.0.1012 2011.04.10 - TrendMicro-HouseCall 9.200.0.1012 2011.04.10 - VBA32 3.12.14.3 2011.04.08 - VIPRE 8976 2011.04.10 - ViRobot 2011.4.9.4402 2011.04.10 - VirusBuster 13.6.297.0 2011.04.10 - Additional information MD5 : dcc8e113a269171a66db17498fed3bbe SHA1 : 93304e372ae44286ee2e011b5ee0c1a56f312669 SHA256: 1d6b54ca0354020581b7aface9ba3eeb98fe5d1b91a9973056d141d9fa9ec4bd and here's the mediafire link: Code: http://www.mediafire.com/?9nx2mughl147xey My thanks for your attention and comment.
Lyrics need MAJOR work. 'The skies all day, the stars all night and we will have the best night and day'. WTF is that shit haha. To be honest I really thought you were taking the piss out of emo songs. The dudes voice isnt bad. It's not good either. When he tries and goes high on the word fire is soooo bad. With a bit of work he could potentially have a rip off style of Bright Eyes. Play more that 4 chords on the guitar too that shit was hell repetitive. All in all it just needs a massive revamp. Keep working though and just realize that there are some notes you should stay away from
Thanks! yeah I have told him that too... okay I'll show him this thread so that he can understand what I meant. Lol. Exactly!
