This is my first site, need advices and opinions

Hi all, I would like to thank BHW for all the contributions. Below is my first... landing page, if you would like to call it that. As a newbie, I would like to know what can I improve on from my site and all advices/criticism are welcomed... It is a clean white hat site and I do not intend to add in any black hat stuffs - as yet.

h**p://calorieshiftdietplan*com

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Sorry not meant to bump my thread, but are there any advices from the floor?

Farrrrrrrrrrrr.............. to many clicks to get to your offer.

Also on the first page you have two calls to action, email submit and Next. Pick one!

areJay