This is my first site, need advices and opinions

Discussion in 'White Hat SEO' started by ultimate34, May 28, 2009.

  1. ultimate34

    ultimate34 Newbie

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    Hi all, I would like to thank BHW for all the contributions. Below is my first... landing page, if you would like to call it that. As a newbie, I would like to know what can I improve on from my site and all advices/criticism are welcomed... It is a clean white hat site and I do not intend to add in any black hat stuffs - as yet.


     
  2. ultimate34

    ultimate34 Newbie

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    Sorry not meant to bump my thread, but are there any advices from the floor?
     
  3. aReJay

    aReJay Power Member

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    Farrrrrrrrrrrr.............. to many clicks to get to your offer.

    Also on the first page you have two calls to action, email submit and Next. Pick one!

    areJay