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The BHW Rap is here!

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by Dubtube, Nov 12, 2011.

  1. Dubtube

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    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NDRWJPA8RAI

    Hey what's up everyone. After around six hours of work, (yes six hours, because of having to cut things and being sick attempting to rap and have it not sounding like crap), I have finally managed to finish the BHW rap. I'm going to post the YouTube link. If a moderator finds that this is not allowed, I'll post a link to download it as an mp3 instead.

    I really appreciate any constructive criticism, yes I know my voice is deep and it doesn't quite match the song perfectly.

    Lyrics:

    Beginning shout out: Donor Member!

    Verse 1:
    BHW, I'm here to tell you
    That for all your trade secrets you know I'll plus rep ya.
    Keep the train rollin' cause you know if you keep going,
    That all the hard work is gonna land you that promotion.
    And no, It's not time to drop that preconceived notion,
    Just keep on expandin, add that water to your ocean.

    Chorus 1:
    Cause warriors are fine and all but they don't get a rhyme to call on every time they need the motivation to keep pressin on!

    Verse 2:
    Every other marketer swears they're makin bank,
    But when put in perspective turns out their income's a charity case.
    So here's to all the winners sipping profit at they dinners,
    Who can easily afford to spend their cash on some spinners.
    And for the rest on their way to goin' real big,
    Don't forget that money ain't what happiness is.

    Chorus 2:
    There's so much more to life than just a big pile of green, success is where it really lies so say what you're meanin'.

    Verse 3:
    Clients callin me? Gotta take this!
    Workin as your own boss is a nonstop business.
    It's not just a job, it's a straight up calling,
    Hit the right spot and now you're free falling.
    That's really it, ain't got much else to say.
    That was my rap, hatters have a nice day!


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    Please drop me a post letting me know what you think. Sorry about the voice issues. :) Hope you enjoyed it! If you have any questions feel free to ask.

    Some facts:

    I was sick the day that I wrote and sang this.

    I've never written or sang a rap before.

    I usually play acoustic or piano, so this was a totally different adventure for me.

    The picture is actually a picture a friend of mine painted for a possible album cover, that's why it looks a little bit weird.
     
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    thumps up for the effort :)
     
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    Thanks, really appreciate it. :) Sorry my voice wasn't more exact. I'll end up actually editing it and reuploading it later, especially when I'm not sick.
     
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    +1 Awesome! "Who can easily afford to spend their cash on some spinners."


     
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    Why is your reputation negative? :D
     
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  7. Dubtube

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    IamNRE: It's not. Like I said, it's my first time ever writing and recording a rap. :p So it's not perfect, and I do apologize for that.

    thxflash: Appreciate it, haha. I didn't actually even like that line, but I'm glad someone got a kick out of it.

    PinkyX: No idea man. :p
     
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    good try..

    leave SEO..
    JOIN RAP GROUP..:D
     
  9. Dubtube

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    :) Maybe not rap but I'm definitely in to music.
     
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    Thats some good effort there.

    But well, I dont really hear raps, so what I encountered here is, I was looking all around the lines in Verse 1 to match with whats played on the song. Sadly, those started only from like 45th second or so :p
     
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  13. Dubtube

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    I don't quite get what you mean. Could you clarify a little?
     
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    +2 for doing this in general. Good job man.
     
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  17. Dubtube

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    Lmfao, this is just too good to be true man.
     
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    I give him props for the last verse, next time make your voice a lil louder, not bad
     
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    "+1","Like" and greetings for the effort! :)