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Suggestions and Comments for my Author Bio for a Gues Post

Discussion in 'Copywriting & Sales Persuasion' started by MikeBuyco, Apr 19, 2013.

  1. MikeBuyco

    MikeBuyco Regular Member

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    Hello guys,

    I'm about to send an article for a guest post in site. I just want your comments and opinions about my author bio if it is coming spammy. if this was the author bio for your site, would you approve it?

    About the Author: [Author] is a regular writer in [website name but no link] and has spent many years reviewing various food supplement products for health conscience consumers who want to improve their health, increase their energy, and live an overall healthier lifestyle. Now he is revealing how taking food supplements is an easy way to provide yourself with a high level of quality nutrition. And how you can consume a densely packed amount of vitamins, minerals and other plant- based nutrients. Go to [anchor text with link] to read a very detailed information on how [keyword with no link] can help you lose weight.

    Thanks
     
  2. small buddy

    small buddy Regular Member

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    This is fine,, nothing to blame big,, but what i feel is this is usual..
     
  3. WayneInc

    WayneInc Senior Member

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    This is perfect Bio..its look fine..
     
  4. Ghostwriter

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    Way too long and complicated and punctuation is awkward.

    My suggestion:

    About the Author: [Author] is a regular writer in [website name but no link] and has spent many years reviewing various food supplement products for health conscious consumers who want to live a healthy life. He specializes in food supplements that provide a high-level nutrition, based on packed amount of vitamins, minerals and other plant- based nutrients. Go to [anchor text with link] to read a very detailed information on how [keyword with no link] can help you lose weight.