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Stop Acne Outbreaks - Just Approved - Affiliates Get 75%

Discussion in 'Clickbank' started by BlackSeng, Oct 9, 2009.

  1. BlackSeng

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    New product got approved several hours ago.

    Stop Acne Outbreaks in 2-3 days - proven, it works.
    Did lots of research to gather this power-pack book.

    And no, it's not some lame book telling people to drink water, have a good diet and such.
    And no, it's not a repackage from other books.


    Book selling at $34.95 - affiliates get 75% :D

    Salespage:
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    http://www.stopacneoutbreaks.com
    Affiliate Link:
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    http://www.stopacneoutbreaks.com/affiliate/affiliate.html
    (affiliate page not fully done)


    NOTE: Website is currently only optimized for Firefox and Google Chrome. Trying to fix this issue for Internet Explorers.
     
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  2. BlackSeng

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    Currently trying to think of some crazy incentives for affiliates.

    Maybe like a thousand dollars reward for every 50 or 100 sales and such. Or maybe even a free laptop.
     
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    yep, that is definately a top tip. give that a whirl and let us know how it goes. might actuall jump on board and promote it as well
     
  4. BlackSeng

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    Thanks badd.

    And guys, do provide feedback on my salespage.

    I deliberately make the salesletter short to make it "legitimate" and real.
    There are so many long salesletter out there.. I'm sure most people would identify it as a Clickbank salespage and they would close it.

    So I'm testing this out. I will let you all know the results. I'm at school now so I couldn't edit anything (the god-damn network administrator disabled many ports; and some ports are needed for me to logon to my ftp server).
     
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    Any one?
     
  6. dotthei

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    Since nobody left any feedback...I'll leave you some...don't take any of what I'm about to say personally. It's constructive criticism and hopefully gets you going in the right direction:

    Design: Needs work, to say the least. The text is hard to read in a lot of places (the orange text especially), the header looks like something that is stock and doesn't really relate...

    You don't have any sort of product 'image' - even though it's an eBook, you can still have an image of the 'book'.

    One design that I think is really well-done is this one - http://14daysacnecure.com it has the eBook picture, a relevant and well-designed header, a customized 'download now' button (you can tell yours is stock...), and overall good flow of a design. I'd recommend hiring a good designer that can work with you on this project if you plan on making sales.

    I should also mention that your "as-seen-on" buttons are pixelated and contorted.

    Here's some other designs that I think are done well - http://www.acnefreesystem4u.com and http://acnereliefblueprint.com/

    Sales Copy: It isn't bad at all, and may be compelling enough for someone to buy. I would recommend split-testing your short and sweet copy with a longer version as well. You never know what converts better until you try both.

    Overall: I think you have something that could potentially take off, I like the domain name, and like I said...the copy is well-written and not too shabby. The design is really all that needs work at this point.
     
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  7. BlackSeng

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    Thanks mate!

    I'll do them as soon as I got home.

    Thanks a lot. I like your constructive feedback :)

    Cheers~
     
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    Oh and one more thing - I checked out the Clickbank marketplace and the acne niche is in dire need of a good quality product - yours could be the answer!
     
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    If you're trying to make it look legitimate I would refrain from using phrases like "learn what dermatologists DON'T want you to know".

    I had something like that on my page but got rid of it because it makes it sound cheesy and my average time on the page has gone up a lot.

    Besides, why wouldn't a dermatologist want you to know how to cure your acne? Heh.

    But yah, its not bad, the graphics could use a little work too though.


     
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    Great product. Will promote it especially if decide on the bonus incentive.
    Posted via Mobile Device
     
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    Thanks! I am finally back home. Now I will implement all the necessary changes.
     
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    Alright~ I have changed the "pixarised" banner and have added the e-book cover.
    Now I'll be concentrating the rest.

    Do provide me with more feedback.
     
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    ^^ Heyyy not too shabby, I'm liking the improvements already
     
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    Thanks dotthei :)
     
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    Jeez... why are there so many numb-nuts out there think that my product is still on "test" mode?

    I've implemented a tracking script to track where users come and go.
    There are a few who came from BHW and immediately access my payment page in less than 30 seconds.

    Do keep in mind that my test-mode is long ago disabled.
     
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    Hey guys, what are some ways to get more traffic?

    I am getting some traffic but I just want more.