Stop Acne Outbreaks - Just Approved - Affiliates Get 75%

New product got approved several hours ago.

Stop Acne Outbreaks in 2-3 days - proven, it works.
Did lots of research to gather this power-pack book.

And no, it's not some lame book telling people to drink water, have a good diet and such.
And no, it's not a repackage from other books.


Book selling at $34.95 - affiliates get 75%

Salespage:
Affiliate Link:
(affiliate page not fully done)


NOTE: Website is currently only optimized for Firefox and Google Chrome. Trying to fix this issue for Internet Explorers.

Currently trying to think of some crazy incentives for affiliates.

Maybe like a thousand dollars reward for every 50 or 100 sales and such. Or maybe even a free laptop.

yep, that is definately a top tip. give that a whirl and let us know how it goes. might actuall jump on board and promote it as well

Thanks badd.

And guys, do provide feedback on my salespage.

I deliberately make the salesletter short to make it "legitimate" and real.
There are so many long salesletter out there.. I'm sure most people would identify it as a Clickbank salespage and they would close it.

So I'm testing this out. I will let you all know the results. I'm at school now so I couldn't edit anything (the god-damn network administrator disabled many ports; and some ports are needed for me to logon to my ftp server).

Any one?

Since nobody left any feedback...I'll leave you some...don't take any of what I'm about to say personally. It's constructive criticism and hopefully gets you going in the right direction:

Design: Needs work, to say the least. The text is hard to read in a lot of places (the orange text especially), the header looks like something that is stock and doesn't really relate...

You don't have any sort of product 'image' - even though it's an eBook, you can still have an image of the 'book'.

One design that I think is really well-done is this one - http://14daysacnecure.com it has the eBook picture, a relevant and well-designed header, a customized 'download now' button (you can tell yours is stock...), and overall good flow of a design. I'd recommend hiring a good designer that can work with you on this project if you plan on making sales.

I should also mention that your "as-seen-on" buttons are pixelated and contorted.

Here's some other designs that I think are done well - http://www.acnefreesystem4u.com and http://acnereliefblueprint.com/

Sales Copy: It isn't bad at all, and may be compelling enough for someone to buy. I would recommend split-testing your short and sweet copy with a longer version as well. You never know what converts better until you try both.

Overall: I think you have something that could potentially take off, I like the domain name, and like I said...the copy is well-written and not too shabby. The design is really all that needs work at this point.

Thanks mate!

I'll do them as soon as I got home.

Thanks a lot. I like your constructive feedback

Cheers~

Oh and one more thing - I checked out the Clickbank marketplace and the acne niche is in dire need of a good quality product - yours could be the answer!

If you're trying to make it look legitimate I would refrain from using phrases like "learn what dermatologists DON'T want you to know".

I had something like that on my page but got rid of it because it makes it sound cheesy and my average time on the page has gone up a lot.

Besides, why wouldn't a dermatologist want you to know how to cure your acne? Heh.

But yah, its not bad, the graphics could use a little work too though.

BlackSeng said:

Thanks badd.

And guys, do provide feedback on my salespage.

I deliberately make the salesletter short to make it "legitimate" and real.
There are so many long salesletter out there.. I'm sure most people would identify it as a Clickbank salespage and they would close it.

So I'm testing this out. I will let you all know the results. I'm at school now so I couldn't edit anything (the god-damn network administrator disabled many ports; and some ports are needed for me to logon to my ftp server).

Click to expand...

Great product. Will promote it especially if decide on the bonus incentive.
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Thanks! I am finally back home. Now I will implement all the necessary changes.

Alright~ I have changed the "pixarised" banner and have added the e-book cover.
Now I'll be concentrating the rest.

Do provide me with more feedback.

^^ Heyyy not too shabby, I'm liking the improvements already

Thanks dotthei

Jeez... why are there so many numb-nuts out there think that my product is still on "test" mode?

I've implemented a tracking script to track where users come and go.
There are a few who came from BHW and immediately access my payment page in less than 30 seconds.

Do keep in mind that my test-mode is long ago disabled.

Hey guys, what are some ways to get more traffic?

I am getting some traffic but I just want more.