Something wrong with my squeezpage

Mods, sorry i didnt know what category to post this in.

Back to my problem. I recieved a ton of target visitors to my site. But somehow, NO CONVERSIONS AT ALL!

I outsourced my salestext and at first point i thought it was good enough, but doesnt look like that when looking at the bank account lol

So i will pay some squeezpage expert to look at my site and give me feedback.

Please PM me with ur price.

PS. The squeez page is promoting a Twitter eBook.