Some Little Rhymes/Raps I've wrote(Nothing Finished)

When I say nothing is finished... Some of them I just wrote real quick wasn't trying to do much. Some of them I could still work on I just need to sit down and do it.

• Good Rap Is A Needle In A Haystack Most Of It's Crap


• Said this to one of my favorite artist today. Will never get seen lol:
@Artist been on repeat all day just about over on Spotify where I listen. Like a play button bot/Just opened up shop/Hit repeat don't stop/Bumpin' cream of the crop/D ain't servin' up slop/Heads bouncin' see em bop/I sit here to drop props/I know when it's HOT!


• Stay inside I don't see the light/Only steppin' out when it hit midnight/come to close you just might get fright/warn ya now coming hard wit a bite/grip and grab things could get tight/feeling mad at everything in sight/being bad only thang that make me glad/takin' things you wish you really coulda had


• I'm on tip top on the laptop game/not playin' them damn thangs/leave dat them fo dem lames/this a money makin' type of thang/hooked on it like crack cocaine/aka like drugs in the vein/whole type of another game/you can tell me I'm insane/but I'm livin' like fa-hasst lane/stack it up yea make it rain/all in it yea for the gain/suffered through years plenty pain/hit the stop yea neva agaaain/fire me up like propane/I'm gased up yea high octane/takin' off just like a plane/always loading dem campaigns/gon' promote that brand name/just renewed them domains/serotonin pumpin' through the brain/do it all with my mouse haaand.


• I stack bills/I stack bands/multiple grands/from a girl on OnlyFans/pics of her tan/sent from my LAN/far from SPAM/all think their her man


• Hey what's sup?/Sittin' on the 4th/not much/Midlife crisis/I wish I had a Porsche so tough/Jägered n Vapored up/head down no luck/here I sit/just stuck.


• Yeah I drop da clutch/speed is a must/I take lead/you in the dust/hear my engine thrust/you fear n' fuss/my gears I trust/your tears I bust/rear clear I'm rough/just steer n' touch


• Old rhyme about a friend:

Look @ Rudy he is always busy n da codin'/Paper chasin' eazy greazy sleazy it was foldin'/see the codin' it was neatly n easy wroten/This man he was always so softly spoken/These bots such simple thoughts n' tokens/When you click start they was always n the smokin'/This is definitely not spoke n' the jokin'/This man in the spam did the codin'/always holdin' stack it up paper chasin' foldin'/this code never seen or stolen/sex fiends for this spam scene keep us goin'/these guys wanted girls easy in the ho-in/so you see where I'm strictly goin'/here I go knock it down like n' the bowlin'/Rudy did specially all thee towin'/see what I mean he was keen to keep it goin'/loved how things were flowin'


• droppin' friends like money to spend/you think it's worth/n it's nothin' n end

MerlonCodes said:

wickidy wack, im just kidding keep it up!

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Anything you think I need to work on? Do you write yourself? Thanks for telling me to keep it up. Could have left out the wickidy wack if you thought I should keep it up though lol. It's all good I know people like to joke around on here.

Awesome, hope to hear you rapping some day, a firend also rap and once he talked about the time and effort to make a song, edit, redo everything, rhythm and requires a lot of pasion and creativity, but he loves it and is really good at it, and those rhymes are really good, keep it up.

The biggest problem I saw is that some of the lines are missing a syllable or two to maintain the same flow of the previous lines.
Switching from 8th or 16th notes to triplets in the middle of a bar is something that is hard to pull off smoothly even in the studio when the beat was meant to do that, not to mention when you're improvising on a beat without these transitions.

MerlonCodes said:

All jokes bro you did great! Not saying keep it up to improve, just keep it up to never let your dreams die!

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I just have fun with it and just started sharing some. Thanks.

MoonStarz said:

Awesome, hope to hear you rapping some day, a firend also rap and once he talked about the time and effort to make a song, edit, redo everything, rhythm and requires a lot of pasion and creativity, but he loves it and is really good at it, and those rhymes are really good, keep it up.

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Thanks, I just do it for fun. Yeah I've never made a complete song that I really like. A lot does go into it for sure. Thanks for the compliment.

roydan said:

The biggest problem I saw is that some of the lines are missing a syllable or two to maintain the same flow of the previous lines.
Switching from 8th or 16th notes to triplets in the middle of a bar is something that is hard to pull off smoothly even in the studio when the beat was meant to do that, not to mention when you're improvising on a beat without these transitions.

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Some of my rhymes aren't wrote to a beat. Then others yeah they are and when I write something I speed up my words if the beat changes or slow them down, or you can ad lib(during recording). You might just need to look at how I write and hear how I say it. The way someone writes something isn't always the way it's said. Some beats I don't have to drop my pace at all with the rhymes. The longer rhymes/raps I showed are to beats that really have no change in pace. • I'm on tip top on the laptop game - was wrote to -Mystikal - Here I Go (Official Instrumental). I say my rhymes to that beat in 1 min and 20 something seconds the beat doesn't change or take me off pace.

Here is a little clip... I did this on a crappy phone lol:


Here is an old song I did with a friend on his album:

"i'ma blow my load on ya nose, drip down to your toes" haha

i'm lovin this

i'ma fuck the beat up right here, from my mouth to ya ear
i'm representin black hat world in the new year
the beats are goin on, and i am goin strong
makin fat stacks every day, all month long

nohupt said:

"i'ma blow my load on ya nose, drip down to your toes" haha

i'm lovin this

i'ma fuck the beat up right here, from my mouth to ya ear
i'm representin black hat world in the new year
the beats are goin on, and i am goin strong
makin fat stacks every day, all month long

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GO! GO! GO!

"Fuck 12 - no keyserver presence we when makin sales
Torsocks no Tails - buffer overflow the scale
Sneakernet the details - snitch missin his entrails"

dotc0m said:

"Fuck 12 - no keyserver presence we when makin sales
Torsocks no Tails - buffer overflow the scale
Sneakernet the details - snitch missin his entrails"

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I listen to him and ytcracker here and there. Ytcracker was an AOLer back in the day. Hackin/Spammin scene... I came from that same scene he had moved on though. He started the forum digital gangster:


Here's a screenshot of me and a group of guys running crackers and mailers on AOL lol:



Some tracks I like with ytc and yung innanet:




Very few(I have more) of some favs by ytcrakcer:

Very good bro, u need to show this people’s

BOA_ said:

Very good bro, u need to show this people’s

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Thanks bro

@BOA_ I shared with friends when I had them(Didn't get much motivation). I share with my family they're all older though so lol if you catch my drift. I post stuff on my FaceBook of what I do but I have no friends on there. It's just more of like a journal where I post stuff. If someone knows me(My Name) and what I look like they'll see it. No one cares about me though bro everyone is living their life and moved on. I'm brain dust in their memory . I may sound like I'm down but I'm good I just know facts.

The kids all out of school/Now at a piss full pool

I did a little video on this topic and shared another rhyme/rap I did in the past.

UncLe Spam said:

@BOA_ I shared with friends when I had them(Didn't get much motivation). I share with my family they're all older though so lol if you catch my drift. I post stuff on my FaceBook of what I do but I have no friends on there. It's just more of like a journal where I post stuff. If someone knows me(My Name) and what I look like they'll see it. No one cares about me though bro everyone is living their life and moved on. I'm brain dust in their memory . I may sound like I'm down but I'm good I just know facts.

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What happened to friends? You write good.

awesomewebsites said:

What happened to friends? You write good.

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Just hard times and bad moves by both parties. It will work out always does. Thanks bro.

Had an artist that I really like do a couple of songs that disappointed me so I wrote a rhyme about it. I still like the artist even though I wrote the diss. Here is the rhyme and a video explaining my thoughts:

makin' shorts holdin' Hot Tamales/ain't nothin' without somebody Riley/tracks need to be heat coming here finally/fans caught up just lookin' kinda blindly/people must be pushin' keepin' thangs timely/sorry to break it down so unkindly/Ima leave it here just with ah little (smiley)

UncLe Spam said:

I did a little video on this topic and shared another rhyme/rap I did in the past.

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Had to delete that last video and I just uploaded it again.

Got into an argument in YouTube comments over a song by an artist and wrote about it. Wrote the lyrics last night and recorded it.

Lyrics:

the YouTube comments/Ima rob it/I got it/you mob it/you slob it/no job it/coming like hobbit/throw it up/lob it/get hit/with da spit/my name's Tripp/I don't quit/straight legit/don't forget/have to hit/when they talkin' that sh!t/know they ain't bout it/I'm coming here equipped/set it off just on lit/break you off in dem bits/ pause /you left up on a fit/go n grab on mom's t!t/wit a nip lick/come back quick/you callin' it quit/you feelin' so sick/from actin' like a d!ck

Damn,which ai?

Nysicomy said:

Damn,which ai?

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No AI I wrote it myself. I wanted to write more but ran into writers block.