SEO optimization - Video feedback please – intro, Thumb, content etc

Hello,



My videos (multifandoms) always cost me a lot of effort, but the clicks don't increase well at first or soon decrease again.

So I wanted to ask you a few things that might be important and how you see them implemented in my videos.

I have linked 2 videos below. I'm really looking forward to a short feedback!



1.What is the overall impression?

2.Do the thumbnail, title and content match (are expectations met)?

3.Does it take too long to get to the “main part” (is the video boring)?

4.Are intro/outro useful or not?

5.Do you notice anything in the description (is it too short, for example)?



Thanks!

The Title does not strike any emotions inside of me for both vids. Need more striking title that conveys emotions. Thumbnail for the 2nd one is good because it is intriguing and make me wonder what's the video about. Thumbnail for the first 1 looks appealing but doesn't strike any emotions for me to click. I see that you are trying so all the best.

Checked your vids. Quick tips: Titles gotta match that energy. Cut to the chase faster in your vids, retention is key. Trim the intros/outros, time is precious. Beef up your descriptions with keywords and CTAs.