Review my Website

gigante126 · Nov 22, 2018

Hey guys

Can you give me your feelings about my website? I'd super appreciate it

http://www.martinalfonso.store

Thanks

Lurker007 · Nov 22, 2018

How is this allowed link sharing is not allowed righr

BrandingCat · Nov 22, 2018

Take care with big brands. One strike and you are finish.

Nia Jax · Nov 22, 2018

I visited on your website & had a look at it,

Your website looks good but there is some more implement that you need to try on your website to get a more attractive look for visitors.

The thing that I noticed it.

Your slider is not good, You need to change an image and add an image that should have a model face.
Add more categories and pages.
Title & Description are missing. Need to add Title & Descriptions.
Website Layout could be more attractive.
Footer part is totally blank, You can add some more contents in the footer.

So these are the something those you need to focus according to my suggestions.

gigante126 · Nov 22, 2018

Lurker007 said:
How is this allowed link sharing is not allowed righr

I noticed the same thing, tried to fix it but the link won't show

Meddie said:
Take care with big brands. One strike and you are finish.

I'll keep that in mind !

Nia Jax said:
I visited on your website & had a look at it,

Your website looks good but there is some more implement that you need to try on your website to get a more attractive look for visitors.

The thing that I noticed it.

Your slider is not good, You need to change an image and add an image that should have a model face.

Add more categories and pages.

Title & Description are missing. Need to add Title & Descriptions.

Website Layout could be more attractive.

Footer part is totally blank, You can add some more contents in the footer.

So these are the something those you need to focus according to my suggestions.

Thanks for that, so useful, I did add 3 new pages and linked them both in the header menu and footer menu.

I'll work on the slideshow, I noticed a bit slow on my cellphone as well!

My theme is very basic, but I'll keep trying to improve it a bit

nomired · Nov 22, 2018

needs a lot of improvements.

macdonjo3 · Nov 22, 2018

your lazy load is too slow. need smaller images or dont lazy load them

linkshake · Nov 22, 2018

gigante126 said:
Hey guys

Can you give me your feelings about my website? I'd super appreciate it

www.martinalfonso.store

Thanks

Visually impressive. I like the clean design and the fact that it's not text-heavy.

blackbeans · Nov 22, 2018

I don't see you making much money off your site UNLESS you PREQUALIFY your traffic

I suggest you invest money in COPYWRITING

SELL ...don't just list

Anyone can list... few bother to actually SELL with their product description page

Also, you talk about pricing immediately...... that's jumping the gun.

Get the viewer INTERESTED first

bune19 · Nov 28, 2018

look good

AceWallGromit · Nov 28, 2018

Looks a bit like the hundreds of shopify stores people open and then ask why they aren't getting any sales. Sorry.

lacover · Nov 29, 2018

Meddie said:
Take care with big brands. One strike and you are finish.

Right now it's not even UP, RIP.

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