Review My Site

Discussion in 'White Hat SEO' started by chhhad, Oct 24, 2012.

  1. chhhad

    chhhad Junior Member

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    Hey, looking for some feedback on a site I'm developing. I know it's rough but let's just say it looks a lot better than the 1st version. I'm hoping I hit all the proper onpage SEO. The logo is a work in progress, so ignore the "Magnificent" at the top. Content is a bit thin as well but that will be improved over time.. Any other feedback is much appreciated.

    http://bit.ly/PppaX3
     
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    PandaDomo Senior Member

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    The home page looks too cluttered in my opinion, everything is the same color and I don't really know where to click or what I'm looking at :p
     
  3. chhhad

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    Thanks. I wish I had the magic touch for a pretty design. What do you think would think better?
     
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    I would remove either the left or the right hand column, as pandademo says, it looks too cluttered. Also, the 4 blocks in the middle should be a bit bigger to capture the attention of the visitor.
     
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    Thanks. Any idea how to resize the blocks?
     
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    Hmm....to much White I think(simple/white)
    Also change the font,I get a headache if I read more than 2 minutes your website
    If you ask me:
    1)change the font
    2)Spice it up a little
    3)Maybe add a big front image(something tasteful?) Maybe a featured article? It would change the design a lot

    PS: Isn't this a theme from eleganthemes? All those themes have that strange font
     
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    Way too much white. It needs more color and less clutter. Hope it works out for you.
     
  8. chhhad

    chhhad Junior Member

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    Thanks! Yes, it's elegant themes. Spice it up is a bit vague, though lol. I'd like to mimic a site like thebudgetbabe . com just honestly don't have the design skills or budget to hire someone.
     
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    What colors? How would you organize things? Thanks.