Review my new blog

DigitalAdvanced said:
Unique content is absolutely important. I totally commend your drive and ambition, and for only being your second blog I have to give you credit. The growth comes from the process so keep building and growing and getting feedback like this. It's obvious that English isn't your first language in your writing, so I also give you major credit for creating the content anyway. However, if your trying to reach an English speaking audience it will be essential for you to clean up the grammar and improve the overall quality of the content. I would also recommend you start by choosing a fairly specific niche in some form and grow on that. It could be science that improves our lives, but what kind of science? There is medical, technological, biological, and various other types of valuable developments in all areas of science that impact our lives every day.
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Thanks for the detailed review. I will keep your points in my mind.
 
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I think the design looks good. Clean and easy to navigate. I think you're off to a great start. Just remember that unique and engaging content is critical. Also try to use proper grammar as much as possible. Good luck!
 
Looks good to me. But you should change colors. I don't know why but green and blue together reminds me websites from year 2000. And do something with menu. Disclaimer, contact etc... should be in footer I think. Good luck.
 
Thanks a lot for the review. I have changed the site color. Let me know if you like it.
 
Just a tought, but have you considered to make it more niche?
What I mean by that?
Well, try to go for mobile or desktop version of site, get everything focused on lets say mobile version, then go for certain field lets say everything with extreme in it's headline or only newest bleeding tech discoveries or only indian related topics... Making it more niche will make you get more visitors that will engage with your topics, you will find it more easier to post and focus.
 
While ur site was loading, I ate my dinner and took a shower, only to come and meet it loaded half way, was still loading... If I was looKng for information I would have clicked away a looong long time ago. Yeah... My internet connection is sharp.
 
Also so not cool to use Sahifa almost everybody knows the theme and can spot it with one look. I suggest you try something not common so people will have a natural cred for it.
 
I see what you are trying to do. You are bouncing around a lot. Concentrate and narrow down your content. Health-sleep-dreams. Make around 10 more articles focusing on dreams. How to get rid of bad dreams. Make a sub-title using s active voice. Here are the steps you need to take to control those unpleasant dreams. bullet point 5 steps. Use an active voice for each of the steps.
 
Add a BLOG page in your site. Publishing your article in other blog is good and it is beneficial but, when you are publishing in your own site is much effective. So I recommend you to start a blog to engage your visibility.
 
Thanks all for your review and suggestions. I have revamped my site and now it looks much better. Hope you all will enjoy it.
 
Adding in some popups could help, highlighting new and interesting content. Also consider using a backdrop that is easier on the eyes when reading posts.
 
What happened to the site? I clicked on it and it said it was not available. I would love to be able to critique it to help you out.
 
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