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Hi I'm getting into the article marketing sector so I would like you guys to review my 430+ words article.

It took me about 1.5-2 Hours to complete.

This is my first article I have ever written.

if there are any spelling error and punctuation errors please correct

Making Money Online: How Difficult Can It Be?

Making money online takes a lot of time and of course patience. For about three months, I have tried to make at least $5.00 a day while on my computer. Why? Cause it saves time, money and a whole lot of stress. So I decided to give it a try for about a week to see if I can be banking within one week of work. So I did attempt it, but I was wrong. I made ZERO dollars in profit and spent over $30.00 for that method ALONE.


You see I thought once you put a little URL shortener on a product that I was promoting and slam it on any and every social media post I was going to get at least one sale, once again I was wrong. I have to admit I did waste a lot of money, but today I realize why I was wasting so much money.


I was not giving much time and effort into what I did. For a second, I thought it was just the methods I tried and that no one can possibly make money online unless you build a popular website like Facebook. Of course, some gurus over exaggerate at times by saying,"You could make $5,000 as soon as you start," But some of those gurus just care about what their earning and use you as their dummy to make even more money. If you want to start earning money online, begin with education.


Start doing research on what you want to do, how much money can you possibly make? How much money and time do you have to invest to start earning. Watch webinars, find communities to get apart of, watch youtube training videos, purchase eBooks. Spend at least a 15 to 30 days on just educating yourself before you jump the gun and start right away before having any knowledge on what your doing. Also don't be afraid to fail if you fail just make sure you fail with progress which means you learn something new and what you were doing wrong what caused you to fail.


I am now earning money online from micro niche websites, but I decided to now switch to writing articles and books just to expand my vocabulary and to express my feelings and my opinions in words. I have the right mindset now for anything I do now when it comes to making money online because I have done it before and I guarantee you I can do it again. So good luck with your journey and do not give up, have faith and give it your all.

Thanks
 
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if there are any spelling error and punctuation errors please correct

It has a few of both.

Correcting them is your job though.

If you want to be an article/content writer you should do that before you deliver/publish anything.

It's lazy and careless not to.
 
Many grammatical mistakes too...




HTH :)
 
It has a few of both.

Correcting them is your job though.

If you want to be an article/content writer you should do that before you deliver/publish anything.

It's lazy and careless not to.

Thanks for the feedback and the tip.

I'm sorry to say, I don't think it is very good.

What can I do to improve it?
 
"Spend at least a 15 to 30 days on just educating yourself before you jump the gun and start right away before having any knowledge on what your doing"

Take your own advice. Plenty of guides which will show you how to produce a well written article.
 
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