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Review My Article 430+ Words

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by Lionist, Aug 3, 2014.

  1. Lionist

    Lionist Newbie

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    Hi I'm getting into the article marketing sector so I would like you guys to review my 430+ words article.

    It took me about 1.5-2 Hours to complete.

    This is my first article I have ever written.

    if there are any spelling error and punctuation errors please correct

    Thanks
     
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  2. Liaata

    Liaata Regular Member

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    You can throw it in the bin now
     
  3. Trepanated

    Trepanated Supreme Member

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    It has a few of both.

    Correcting them is your job though.

    If you want to be an article/content writer you should do that before you deliver/publish anything.

    It's lazy and careless not to.
     
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  4. TJnoodles

    TJnoodles Registered Member

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    I'm sorry to say, I don't think it is very good.
     
  5. srb888

    srb888 Elite Member

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    Many grammatical mistakes too...




    HTH :)
     
  6. Lionist

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    Thanks for the feedback and the tip.

    What can I do to improve it?
     
  7. srb888

    srb888 Elite Member

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    Allow me :)...

    Read the third and the fourth paragraphs. You will find the key to your success!
     
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  8. CazuaL

    CazuaL Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    "Spend at least a 15 to 30 days on just educating yourself before you jump the gun and start right away before having any knowledge on what your doing"

    Take your own advice. Plenty of guides which will show you how to produce a well written article.
     
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