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It is the main section in my About page for a fraud prevention consultancy website........

xxxcccrrr, Principal Consultant

For businesses selling online, the best defense against fraud is a robust proactive fraud prevention strategy. A strategy
that repels and voids any criminal attempt to commit cyber crime.

Who better to help you custom design your fraud prevention strategy than a man who spent years circumventing all
types of anti-fraud measures?

Who better to help you protect your business than a once convicted - turned good guy - fraud prevention specialist?

After all, organizations like the US Department for Homeland Security, companies like Microsoft, and
online retailers like NewEgg rely on reformed cyber criminals to help them fight cyber crime. Why shouldn't you?

I'm xxxcccrrr and yes, I'm a former (reformed) fraudster. And after seeing where my choices led me, I decided to change
directions - more precisely in the opposite direction - by dedicating myself to helping merchants protect their businesses
against fraud.

May be your fraud department have been having some issues trying to mitigate some attacks. This is where I can help you
and your team get on top of the problem.

I know how fraudsters think. And how they operate.
Due to my extensive experience I can identify areas of concern in your fraud protection and advise you and your team on
the best way to address those issues.
 
It is the main section in my About page for a fraud prevention consultancy website........

xxxcccrrr, Principal Consultant

For businesses selling online, the best defense against fraud is a robust proactive fraud prevention strategy. A strategy
that repels and voids any criminal attempt to commit cyber crime.

Who better to help you custom design your fraud prevention strategy than a man who spent years circumventing all
types of anti-fraud measures?

Who better to help you protect your business than a once convicted - turned good guy - fraud prevention specialist?

After all, organizations like the US Department for Homeland Security, companies like Microsoft, and
online retailers like NewEgg rely on reformed cyber criminals to help them fight cyber crime. Why shouldn't you?

I'm xxxcccrrr and yes, I'm a former (reformed) fraudster. And after seeing where my choices led me, I decided to change
directions - more precisely in the opposite direction - by dedicating myself to helping merchants protect their businesses
against fraud.

May be your fraud department have been having some issues trying to mitigate some attacks. This is where I can help you
and your team get on top of the problem.

I know how fraudsters think. And how they operate.
Due to my extensive experience I can identify areas of concern in your fraud protection and advise you and your team on
the best way to address those issues.
Good, but I'd rephrase cyber criminals if possible
 
Good, but I'd rephrase cyber criminals if possible

Yes, thank you for the feedback. It's been a struggle to find a replacement name, I don't want to use the words 'cyber criminal' or 'fraudster'. I'm going to try and find a nicer sounding replacement name, if possible.
 
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