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Rate this Caricature

Discussion in 'Graphic Design' started by halucination, Nov 3, 2015.

  1. halucination

    halucination Newbie

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    So I did this for someone.
    He wanted Mojang style character + had to look like him
    Cannot post his image for privacy

    rate please and where can I improve

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  2. Hawkster

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    Its kind of impossible to rate when we cant see the who its supposed to look like lol. Ask him directly - im sure he'll tell you what improvements he would like
     
  3. SalTheRock

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    I'll give 6 out of 10. There is a need of improvement at eyes and lips section, colour scheme should also be improve.
     
  4. grootgroot

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    i r8 that 8/8 m8
     
  5. irweazel

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    It looks like a drawing drawn by an immature person on Paint that is available on window. You must have to create a clear and real picture like a camera pic. That will be more effective and elegant.
     
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    I'd give it a tree, maybe tree fiddy.
     
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    nothing special i would say ....... sorry but my opinion.
     
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    5/10
    eye,nose,lips,shadow
     
  9. HoneyHelper

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    for "Mojang style character" part = 9/10
    for "had to look like him" part = don't know!
     
  10. Mari0

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    5/10, looks like a clipart from stock sites
     
  11. Lomomu

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    5/10 too, sorry to say.
     
  12. 4lpha0mega

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    Nose shadow is kinda strange...

    Eyes have no depth. There is no variance in your line thickness... so, need to work on your line quality. It's really not much of a caricature, just a simple cartoon.

    So, rating your "caricature" - I'd give it a 2/10... as a basic cartoon, I'd give it a 4/10. Line quality really makes your work pop.

    Also, he's not doing anything nor showing any emotion. It's just a face with a shirt and half arms. No actions, no emotions, just bland. Colors are a bit bland as well. Needs to be more fun.
     
  13. whiteblackseo

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    Not sure what to rate....? Whats your pricing anyway, I would like to know.
     
  14. kregz

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    I think it looks pretty clean, but it really depends how much you were paid.
     
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    5/10
    eye,nose,lips,shadow
     
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    http://www.blackhatworld.com/blackhat-seo/graphic-design/799392-rate-caricature.html#post8554223
    Copycat?? :D
    Someone who is in Jr VIP should be able to at leeeeast write original 1 liners and not copy paste someone else's comment AS IS!
     
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  17. ponymurder

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    It doesn't exerts original effects.
    Create good animated pictures that provides some real and 3D effects that can attract people. It's an initial design.
     
  18. yoyo33

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    8.5 / 10

    good job
     
  19. opahopa

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    He looks like a boy from old flash-based game :D
     
  20. Altaner

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    7/10
    Work details of shadow or try a Flat design better