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  1. Tiedemies

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  2. shabang

    shabang Registered Member

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    It's riddled with grammar,spelling and context errors.
     
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  3. Tiedemies

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    That´s what I thought (being non-native english speaker myself), thanks.
     
  4. kkkola

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    Written by a ghost writer?
     
  5. Tiedemies

    Tiedemies Newbie

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    Yep. Written by a guy who charges for that stuff.
     
  6. FreeTheTV

    FreeTheTV BANNED BANNED

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    I think that you may want a refund. Spelling and grammar is pretty messed up. If this Are You A Person Who Does Not Want to Compromise the Delicacies of Your Diet? [FONT=&quot]is the actual title, you may want to get someone who can catch someones attention in less than 15 words, and end with a question. Maybe something like "Eat ANYTHING".
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  7. davioli

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    I find that the above is quite offensive to ghostwriters most of whom are really good at their job. Most of them make more than probably 90% of the newbies on this forum.
     
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    I doubt the person who wrote this actually did a spell check using MS Word. If that was done, those spelling errors would have been picked up along with some of the other errors.