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Trepanated said:

I asked because I didn't want to offend you with my feedback if it was your own work.

To me it reads like a cross between and spun article and one written by someone whose first language is not English.

If it is spun, then with a little effort if could be turned into something much more readable.

If it is hand written, I would not use that person again. It is careless and they have not thought about what they have written.

EDIT:

I just read the second article.

It looks to me like it's generated by software that is piecing an article together from several sources?

If that's the case, I would say it has potential but needs some fine tuning.

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