Ranking local business website – am I doing it right?

One comment on "spinning." I think a lot of people are just lazy.


Take this paragraph here from that mold site above that was linked from the site above.
There are five general principles used in the mold remediation process. It is critical to select a contractor who will apply all of these principles throughout the entire mold remediation process.


You can re-write it, on the fly (this will be rough) like this. ....Did you know that to perform proper mold remediation there are 5 major things you must do. We call these principles and they are essential to have mold removed quickly from your home, business, or property. It is essential that you use a mold remediation expert who will perform all 5 of these steps when doing mold remediation...


Note: I basically know nothing about mold remediation. That took me 45 seconds to re-write, and it is late and I'm tired. Yes, I do it on the fly a lot, and I would definitely insert some branding or cities or company name in there, but that is a lot better content (in my opinion) than people who just throw it into a spinner. And then, add another step (as long as it isn't BS or something). So it is 6 steps...and make your company different.

anderson313 said:

One comment on "spinning." I think a lot of people are just lazy.


Take this paragraph here from that mold site above that was linked from the site above.
There are five general principles used in the mold remediation process. It is critical to select a contractor who will apply all of these principles throughout the entire mold remediation process.


You can re-write it, on the fly (this will be rough) like this. ....Did you know that to perform proper mold remediation there are 5 major things you must do. We call these principles and they are essential to have mold removed quickly from your home, business, or property. It is essential that you use a mold remediation expert who will perform all 5 of these steps when doing mold remediation...


Note: I basically know nothing about mold remediation. That took me 45 seconds to re-write, and it is late and I'm tired. Yes, I do it on the fly a lot, and I would definitely insert some branding or cities or company name in there, but that is a lot better content (in my opinion) than people who just throw it into a spinner. And then, add another step (as long as it isn't BS or something). So it is 6 steps...and make your company different.

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But you also overdid the keyword-stuffing (phrases in red) in that tiny paragraph...
The green extra stuff actually is helping your para from becoming more "out of tune'.

• There are five general principles > becomes > We call these ???? principles ????
• Sentences contradict: You must do... (and) ... essential that you use an expert

Better to use an article spinner if your manually created (collection of interdependent) statements are equally difficult to properly understand by another normal reader. Or, take more time. That 45 seconds might look good if you're out there to win a Rubik's Cube competition.

Article spinner is not for the lazy, contrary to the general belief. It's a great tool in the hands of a knowledgeable man and an expert. In fact, no tool is made for the lazy people, even the tv remote, for that matter, or the sofa. Those guys simply misuse them imho.

The paragraph in other words would sound something like this:
"You come to meet me. You come to meet me at 7 PM. You come to meet me at 7 pm this evening (of course, not tomorrow), but before you come to me at 7 pm this evening, don't forget to telephone me first, because I may not be in town after this afternoon, and shall not be in definitely before 7 PM this evening, so as it is a possibility, we cannot possibly meet when you come to meet me at 7 pm this evening..."

jk, and sorry for a little bit of exaggeration!

Nothing is perfect in the world (to all readers), literally speaking!

yeah that is not a great example since it is over done with keywords and was done on the fly. ..like I said...was late...but all your feedback I agree with 100%.

*** really need to have a very good time and a lot of works to be able to get ranked and success on local marketing. I agree to on those comments, it helps me too.