Please ROAST my Website!!

Simple, clean, fast .... 10/10
 
I don't understand why people are giving him a hard time. ;)


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Seriously: Once the site is up, will be happy to provide feedback.
 
IT A BLANK PAGE M8.

use firefox, use incognito mode.

Visit domain it blank .
 
This is some apple level minimalism!
Genius! :D

Also, the domain name is whack...
I don't get why anyone on the planet uses dashes in their domain names. >.<

Should have used numbers instead ;)
 
Your htaccess file is corrupt mate ;) try to resave your permalinks
 
"How to make your site load in <100ms"
I design in mostly static, so I checked to see if mine did, after you said that, but it's at 360ms... :(
There are a couple of JavaScript stuff on there, though, so maybe if I removed that stuff it'd be worthy! :eek:
 
This website loads slower than Trump climbing stairs with COVID.
 
Apologies. Not sure why the site is not working for most of you. I have asked another bunch of people and they say the site is up and running. Please check when you get time. @Festinger i have saved permalinks again.
 
I could really use some feedback on my website I created for a client https://www.flaunt-india.com/

I learnt to design all this from Youtube and BHW. Thank you @Festinger for suggesting a good theme.

P.S. This is my first website for a client.

Thank you!
  1. You should add an H1-tag, which describes what you do, and who you do it for.
    For example:
    "Ancient Indian Pottery
    For Home Décor"

    Or some thing like that.
    The first thing I notice, when I land on your site, is that it's difficult to tell what the purpose of the site might be.
  2. Your Meta Data should be set in a similar fashion, based on keywords, as well
  3. The Logo is poor. A High-Quality Display Font Text Logo would be better than what is there.
  4. Multiple links, in the upper header, are not set, and seem to simply be native of the theme.
  5. tons of space inbetween sections --- needs to be tighter
  6. The stock video and images are nice, but they don't really seem like in-house videos of a pottery shop.
    (oh wait, you don't sell pottery, you sell paintings and photos... LoL... that needs to be made clear)
  7. remaining h-tags make no sense, and seem to have no purpose. Looks like filler content
  8. Not sure I get the products, in context with the rest of the page. Not sure what the theme is, etc.
    Also seems like your shop should be featured above the fold, perhaps.
  9. The Instagram stories section seems like it should be replaced with your actual brand.
    Or simply removed.
  10. Footer Links have lots of blank areas. Also don't spot a sitemap link.
  11. The Artists section is the most relevant thing I've seen, so far, so that should probably be featured on the homepage, to some degree.
    When you click on the first artist, though, it doesn't show any samples of their art! :(
    You should put the best artist first on the list. :P
  12. "Uncover" goes no-where.
  13. "Indulge" should just be called "shop"... LoL ... That section turns everything on its head... I guess if that's what you were going for, then sure...
    See if you can get the best artwork, the actual paintings, for show-up first. It looks more professional, but I understand that it's probably just a feed.
    Actually, now that I think about it, the shop header does look better than the homepage header.
    Maybe if they were the same, it'd be better. :D
  14. Some of the page load is a little sluggish, and then blips over.... not sure if anything can be done to improve... not a big deal, but just an observation....
  15. Lots of other design thoughts, but last thing I'll say is you should consider featuring the very best few pieces of art above the fold on the homepage.
Wasn't planning on being so critical, and making a list, but hoping it hasn't discouraged you, man.
I wish you well, and hope you get it to a better and better place.

Best to you! :)
Ivan
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  1. You should add an H1-tag, which describes what you do, and who you do it for.
    For example:
    "Ancient Indian Pottery
    For Home Décor"

    Or some thing like that.
    The first thing I notice, when I land on your site, is that it's difficult to tell what the purpose of the site might be.
  2. Your Meta Data should be set in a similar fashion, based on keywords, as well
  3. The Logo is poor. A High-Quality Display Font Text Logo would be better than what is there.
  4. Multiple links, in the upper header, are not set, and seem to simply be native of the theme.
  5. tons of space inbetween sections --- needs to be tighter
  6. The stock video and images are nice, but they don't really seem like in-house videos of a pottery shop.
    (oh wait, you don't sell pottery, you sell paintings and photos... LoL... that needs to be made clear)
  7. remaining h-tags make no sense, and seem to have no purpose. Looks like filler content
  8. Not sure I get the products, in context with the rest of the page. Not sure what the theme is, etc.
    Also seems like your shop should be featured above the fold, perhaps.
  9. The Instagram stories section seems like it should be replaced with your actual brand.
    Or simply removed.
  10. Footer Links have lots of blank areas. Also don't spot a sitemap link.
  11. The Artists section is the most relevant thing I've seen, so far, so that should probably be featured on the homepage, to some degree.
    When you click on the first artist, though, it doesn't show any samples of their art! :(
    You should put the best artist first on the list. :p
  12. "Uncover" goes no-where.
  13. "Indulge" should just be called "shop"... LoL ... That section turns everything on its head... I guess if that's what you were going for, then sure...
    See if you can get the best artwork, the actual paintings, for show-up first. It looks more professional, but I understand that it's probably just a feed.
    Actually, now that I think about it, the shop header does look better than the homepage header.
    Maybe if they were the same, it'd be better. :D
  14. Some of the page load is a little sluggish, and then blips over.... not sure if anything can be done to improve... not a big deal, but just an observation....
  15. Lots of other design thoughts, but last thing I'll say is you should consider featuring the very best few pieces of art above the fold on the homepage.
Wasn't planning on being so critical, and making a list, but hoping it hasn't discouraged you, man.
I wish you well, and hope you get it to a better and better place.

Best to you! :)
Ivan
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Damn, you literally roasted it man, OP u can close the thread now, u got what you came for:D
 
ixilcrypt is a genius

You guys have no idea what this thread is really about.
 
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