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Hi friends i have just put up my new website www.herbalhealthhealing.com , please tell what all improvements now i should put in to drive traffic and get sales.
Thanks in advance for your suggestions and help
 
thanks but please guide me how to drive quality traffic to my website
 
I like your site too. Looks professional and clean. One thing that rather strange is the social bookmarking buttons. This kind of sites usually don't need them.

For traffic you can drive some fake traffic or buying traffic to increase your alexa rank first and after that you can hope for more real traffic coming and buying your products.
 
thanks for the advice i will remove the social bookmarking button
 
doesnt cashburners.com teach you how to drive targetted traffic to your site?
 
they have those conventional ways like submit to google , yahoo , msn and post ads on classified sites i want some more ideas which only blackhatworld can provide.
 
http://www.blackhatworld.com/blackhat-seo/f28-black-hat-seo/
http://www.blackhatworld.com/blackhat-seo/f30-white-hat-seo/

All you need to know is in there.
 
I post the ad in CL, The effect is very obvious, maybe you could try it. but now the CL do not allow outside US people to post.
 
thank you so much for your helpful suggestions folks i really love u all
 
Very professional looking.

Is that a template or did you do everything by hand?
 
Code:
<title>Herbal Medicine Store - Medicine for mens health, enlarged prostate, womens health, impotence, premature ejaculation, penis enlargement, hair loss treatment, weak eye sight, eye problems, eyedrops, anti aging herbs,increase sperm count,Tribulus Terrestris, virgin cream,enlarged prostate, prostatitis, prostate enlargement, tighten your vagina cream</title>

Gd luck getting ranked.
 
few bits good and bad. Yes it looks templaty, but thats fine. Its clean. Colours are perfect.

1/ The front page content is very a lot of text. Could you refine that so that it is outstanding copy for example you need a compelling offer or statement.

e.g. The most outstanding blah blah ever or

The Ultimate way to x y z

I love the niche... and I think you have a winner here...

Ask yoursefl the following questions.

Is using herbal as a phrase to sell something wise? Why not use Alternative or let the user assume or read in the small print that its a herbal.

Could you say the words Get the perfect exceptional natural erection.

Or Now you can have the most powerful erections.


Similarly unless the sales copy is super super neccessary for SEO I would loose it and make the font bigger and use 10% of those words

For example

Welcome to Herbal Health Healing. We are dedicated to providing you the best natural herbal solutions for all your concerns like premature ejaculation, impotence, enlarged prostate, BPH, depression, eye problems, women libido enhancers,energy boosters, hair loss treatment. All our products are tested to perfection and made with top quality herbs so that you get nothing but the best results. A large number of customer testimonials bear testimony to the efficacy of our products.They have been manufactured in FDA approved naturaceutical laboratories, across Asia , Europe and USA.

Could be:


We are the worlds premier providers of FAD approved products that combat:

SWINE FLU
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We are cited as one of the leading authorities in these unique medical breakthroughs and we are delighted to invite you to join our customers by using these products free of charge, with absolutely no risk whatsoever.

Whatsmore because the products are stringently approved and are natural, they help your body work to its maximum potential without drug risks or complications.

Etc etc

Its ALL in the copy on a site like this... The minimum words the maximum clever use of synonyms.

The products are also expensive. You really need to think about giving them the option to buy something cheap people will commit if the copy is right and its cheap enough.

If yoiu want to make money with repeat billing better to not rip them off to save charge backs.

The 5% coupon puts me off. it reeks of cheap sales tactics. You need to be more confident and arrogant

the fonts of the products could be more 2.0 ie arial or something that looks modern, this will put them at ease

Niagra - supports erectile disfunciton! Supports? is not a word to make me buy I want to know this will Destroy, obliterate, remove, end, etc etc, but you wouldnot use those agreessive words

100% satisfaction gif is a bit weak i would prefer that to be a more attractive gif that reenforces Absolute refund policy or something you think of.

Blasting them with too much text does not work, really need to cut it right back,.

Cleverly written thank you emails are tacky buyt might help a bit "thanks I was dubious but I am so grateful I found you" Steve P Bigford

A way to do this without making it tacky is to pretend that the person can leave a testimonial for a discount for example

Section header

15% from your next order when you leave us your valuable feedback.

list of testimonials.

Overall in summary a well presented well served niche...you can do better lookin at the above for sure.
 
On the name on the left "herbalhealthhealing"

Break it up use a dot or soemthing
give it some space between the words
and think maybe make the middle word a different color

bottom line...
The site looks cool

the name is not easy to read at first blush

make it easy to read so people can read it and remember it

Peace,
O
 
Code:
<title>Herbal Medicine Store - Medicine for mens health, enlarged prostate, womens health, impotence, premature ejaculation, penis enlargement, hair loss treatment, weak eye sight, eye problems, eyedrops, anti aging herbs,increase sperm count,Tribulus Terrestris, virgin cream,enlarged prostate, prostatitis, prostate enlargement, tighten your vagina cream</title>

Gd luck getting ranked.

Yeah choose ten keywords max. tighten your vagina cream is a good keyword as far as competition goes. Might want to use the google external keyword tool to see what kind of search results you will get for that.
 
thanks for pointing out the errors , i will work on all this shortcomings, thanks again
 
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