Liviu Botea
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Please review my site.
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PaintedBlack
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It's not bad, your logo is a bit fucked, could be made sharper and cleaned up from those lines and dots around it, this is very simple to do and I'm sure you can get around this. At first it looked like I had scratched my screen, scared the fuck out of me lmfao.
Liviu Botea
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Dis you find any affiliate link on my site?
Liviu Botea
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Lol thanks for your tips. I will try to make a better logo
Liviu Botea
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You are right.
but it's pretty hard to rank. For a newbie like me.
devkareem
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Just saying buddy so i could save you a warning point
Anyway from source code it appears you using wordpress 4.9.8? if so you should update to 4.9.9 or 5.0.2 because of the vulnerabilities.
magicjones
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Your logo is spelled wrong. A little strange how you chose to write "The importance of 12 B vitamin" instead of B-12, was this intentional?
Asayus
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Your website is "health" newsly and yet your logo says that you are "healty" newsly.
Your "Privacy Policy" page is called "Privacy & Policy".
"Therms of Service"? Do you even know what a "Therm" is? A "Therm" is a measurement of heat. I believe the word you are looking for is "Terms" which you would know if you actually typed up your Terms of Service instead of copying it from somewhere.
On the topic of copying. Every image on your site is from Google, and every article is a direct copy, word for word, not even spun, from other health sites. I know, I found them all in 10 seconds.
Your social links link to a web design company that has nothing to do with your site.
Your "About Us" page is very odd. You site is about: "discussing problems related to health and health", Your goal is to: support "anybody to acquire dreams", you start a sentence with a lowercase: "dreams. whether", what does this even mean: "by using suggesting what to do, how and while to do it." ???
I get it, your English is probably not the best, but almost no effort was put into this site. I honestly feel as if I put more effort into ripping it apart than you did putting it together. You can't just put something like this up, throw a ton of ads on it and hope for the best.
If I had to give you a suggestion, I would suggest you clean up all of the grammatical and spelling mistakes that any free spell check would catch for you, and then work on making unique content. Or at the very least, spun content.
Your "Privacy Policy" page is called "Privacy & Policy".
"Therms of Service"? Do you even know what a "Therm" is? A "Therm" is a measurement of heat. I believe the word you are looking for is "Terms" which you would know if you actually typed up your Terms of Service instead of copying it from somewhere.
On the topic of copying. Every image on your site is from Google, and every article is a direct copy, word for word, not even spun, from other health sites. I know, I found them all in 10 seconds.
Your social links link to a web design company that has nothing to do with your site.
Your "About Us" page is very odd. You site is about: "discussing problems related to health and health", Your goal is to: support "anybody to acquire dreams", you start a sentence with a lowercase: "dreams. whether", what does this even mean: "by using suggesting what to do, how and while to do it." ???
I get it, your English is probably not the best, but almost no effort was put into this site. I honestly feel as if I put more effort into ripping it apart than you did putting it together. You can't just put something like this up, throw a ton of ads on it and hope for the best.
If I had to give you a suggestion, I would suggest you clean up all of the grammatical and spelling mistakes that any free spell check would catch for you, and then work on making unique content. Or at the very least, spun content.
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Asayus
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That's because he copy and pasted that article from another poorly written article on a gym's website.
psychorollercoaster
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Which theme are you using?
Liviu Botea
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- Jun 25, 2018
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Bro thanks you for your tips. I will try to improve my site
Liviu Botea
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Bro. I hired someone on fiver to create this siteBro thanks you for your tips. I will try to improve my site
Bro how do I add SSL for free?
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cloudflare provide CDN and SSL for free.
Liviu Botea
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I appreciate you tip bro
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