Please Rate My Song!

Tony$tark

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• Nov 26, 2018

• #1

Hello BlackHatWorld!

My hobby is music production and songwriting. I glad to introduce my debut single called "Ven" (Come).

You can listen my song here https://soundcloud.com/majordreamer/ven

I think it really hot! What do you think? Post your review here.

Please don't post negative reviews. If you don’t like the song just pass by.

Any help in song promotion are welcome

 

blogzandstuff

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Jan 1, 2015

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• Nov 26, 2018

• #2

MajorDreamer said:

Hello BlackHatWorld!

My hobby is music production and songwriting. I glad to introduce my debut single called "Ven" (Come).

You can listen my song here https://soundcloud.com/majordreamer/ven

I think it really hot! What do you think? Post your review here.

Please don't post negative reviews. If you don’t like the song just pass by.

Any help in song promotion are welcome

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Might be a good idea to rephrase the last sentence as this is the lounge and you're bound to get a newbie trying to sell you a service lol!

 

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BrandingCat

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Jan 6, 2015

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• Dec 4, 2018

• #3

Voice it`s ok for genre, the instrumental it`s shit.

 

lacifitra

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• Dec 4, 2018

• #4

Not trying to be rude, but you really, really have to practice your instrumentals.
Voice is okay, although not the best.

 

MgicalaEarner

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Jul 8, 2017

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• Dec 4, 2018

• #5

3,385,259 plays is that really you :O

 

bartosimpsonio

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• Dec 4, 2018

• #6

Sounds a bit like Despacito? Anyway, cool seeing musicians here on BHW. Congrats.

 

Freddy12

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Feb 8, 2015

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• Dec 4, 2018

• #7

It's OK for me. 7/10

 

ss_social

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Jun 24, 2018

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• Dec 4, 2018

• #8

The song has a lot of potential in its basics to be a hit, but it sounds like it needs some refining.

 

nakamura

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• Dec 4, 2018

• #9

For a hobby it sounds pretty good.

Some guys in this thread seem to have a very high expectation to someone who is just doing this as a hobby.

 

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Deleted member 657006

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• Dec 4, 2018

• #10

sorry nit bring rude .

99% of people talk english these days

can i have a english version please ?

 

ss_social

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• Dec 4, 2018

• #11

redarrow said:

sorry nit bring rude .

99% of people talk english these days

can i have a english version please ?

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I enjoy Despacito greatly and I have ZERO clue what they are singing about, lol

 

belallama

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Jan 14, 2018

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• Dec 4, 2018

• #12

Nice production mate, smooth mix...i like the bit crushed/vocoder-noise groove loop in the background and the offbeat noise.
Ain't really my genre but you can obviously produce very well. Cheers