http://www.nipunmehraenterprise.com --- Is it good enough? Will people be convinced. I spend the whole day making this after i paid some guy $27 to make one which was horrible 
Please rate my new Ref site!
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Nigel Farage
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- Feb 8, 2012
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People don't want to tell you the bad news. You might have been better off with the $27.00 site.
PhillipsPierce
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- Dec 27, 2011
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Try building it with xsitepro, I can make a professional looking page in 5mins.
mrecigarette
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- Jan 17, 2012
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lol is the site 1 whole image chopped up into pieces? anyway its horrible
KraftyKyle
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- Aug 13, 2008
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EVERYTHING! Honestly, that site is really poorly done. Go to any squeeze page. Go to clickbank and click on any product in the marketplace...
The fonts are terrible. The images are bad. I could sniff out the BS the second the page loaded.
genieswish
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- Apr 6, 2012
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Jeez even I wouldn't sign up for that and Im a sucker for free stuff!
Dawgtown
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- Mar 7, 2012
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2 things....
1) If, and only if, you can drive targeted teen traffic to this "site", what kind of conversion rate do you think you will get from this squeeze err sleeze page? (Personally, I would hit the back button before this page finished loading.)
2) Interested to see your bounce rate. You might be able to convert with a back button re-direct? Just a thought....
Sorry to sound so negative, but you were looking for an honest opinion. It would be interesting to see the one that you paid $27 for. This page fails to even come close to some of the worst squeeze pages that I have seen. There are far too many links on the page for one and they are all the same. There is very little flow to the page (reason to scroll down and read more). Your fonts are pretty bad and not easy on the eye...go larger if you're using bold. Center your text!...Eyes should flow through your page and want to keep moving towards your offer! Using a video intro may be pretty solid too...just a thought.
With some polish, this could actually work. Make sure to place your Amazon banner low on your page so people don't bounce. Good luck my friend!
1) If, and only if, you can drive targeted teen traffic to this "site", what kind of conversion rate do you think you will get from this squeeze err sleeze page? (Personally, I would hit the back button before this page finished loading.)
2) Interested to see your bounce rate. You might be able to convert with a back button re-direct? Just a thought....
Sorry to sound so negative, but you were looking for an honest opinion. It would be interesting to see the one that you paid $27 for. This page fails to even come close to some of the worst squeeze pages that I have seen. There are far too many links on the page for one and they are all the same. There is very little flow to the page (reason to scroll down and read more). Your fonts are pretty bad and not easy on the eye...go larger if you're using bold. Center your text!...Eyes should flow through your page and want to keep moving towards your offer! Using a video intro may be pretty solid too...just a thought.
With some polish, this could actually work. Make sure to place your Amazon banner low on your page so people don't bounce. Good luck my friend!