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Please Help With My Sales Page

Discussion in 'Clickbank' started by hyperlite, Oct 22, 2009.

  1. hyperlite

    hyperlite Regular Member

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    Hey guys,

    I just got my second major product launch approved. I've spent a lot of time on the sales page, but I still think it could use some improvements. BHW being my favorite IM forum I decided to come here for suggestions.

    Product: The Official Cellulite Cure
    Sales page: http://www.getridofmycellulite.com

    I'm going to be doing some major promotion over the next couple weeks so any help is much appreciated.

    Thanks!
     
  2. hyperlite

    hyperlite Regular Member

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    Perfect??

    Cmon guys help a BHW'er out.
     
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    i breifly skimmed over it and it looks good but
    if you want to improve it I can say that I think it can use

    more before and after pics...
    a pic or 2 of a dr.

    your bullets are too general. theres nothing that makes my mouth quench
    and say i have to find that out.

    plus you say its not a diet and not an exercise
    program but then you talk about 3hrs per wk. which seems
    like a lot and you give workout routines, workout schedule
    and weight loss book, which make me think its time consuming
    work intensive diet and not the quick fix miracle pill people might be
    searching for.

    you might consider taking the angle that kevin trudeu
    takes that the drs dont want you to know this stuff
    and surgery is big biz... and the secret is in keeping
    your body hormones in non cellulite state...
    and there are x amt of things in our daily life
    influencing hormone levels that promote cellulite

    iow explain more of the what/hormones... and how people
    in china and zimbabway dont have cellulite because of
    certain foods/vitamins/herbs... and why the info/cure has been
    hidden from the public

    i think an angle like that might have better appeal.
     
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    JesusChristSr Regular Member

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    I don't like the pictures bro. Looks like it goes from bad to not that much better! Especially the first set.
     
  5. hyperlite

    hyperlite Regular Member

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    Great feedback, thanks guys.

    The first pic is not a before and after but I see what you mean.
     
  6. hyperlite

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    Great post, except it is an exercise program... at least partly. I say its not a weight loss program, but it is an exercise program. Just resistance training.

    I will definitely include some more about hormones as you suggested. I was going for a legitimate solution to the problem (diet and exercise) rather than a miracle pill but you may be right that people dont want to do any work they just want the problem solved... unfortunately thats not possible.

    Not sure what to do here.

     
  7. theconfidenceman

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    if youre going with the exercise angle.. then perhaps.. 6min cellulite cure asapposed to 3 hr... and how most ex can be done while watching tv.. or while youre at work... and how your exercises are more effective because yours uses iso-targetting... and cellulite confusion... and your exercises are more efficient ....
    iow different,better,little known, easier, quicker etc..

    kevin trudeu got me and his system is basically a starvation diet + obscure hormone shot.. and he says its no diet.. etc..
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  8. hyperlite

    hyperlite Regular Member

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    Awesome. This is exactly what I needed.

    Thanks for the help bro I really appreciate it.
     
  9. hyperlite

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    Ok, I've made the suggested changes. How's it looking now?

    Any more comments?
     
  10. hyperlite

    hyperlite Regular Member

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    Do you mean cellulite sales pages or sales pages in general?

    I agree with you that the typical sales page layout looks stupid, but thats because we're internet marketers and we know whats going on. The average internet user still goes for it.

    So yes, it does bring in money.

    As IM'ers we see things differently than most people do and can see through sales pages easily.