Please Help With My Sales Page

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hyperlite

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Hey guys,

I just got my second major product launch approved. I've spent a lot of time on the sales page, but I still think it could use some improvements. BHW being my favorite IM forum I decided to come here for suggestions.

Product: The Official Cellulite Cure
Sales page: http://www.getridofmycellulite.com

I'm going to be doing some major promotion over the next couple weeks so any help is much appreciated.

Thanks!
 
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Perfect??

Cmon guys help a BHW'er out.
 
i breifly skimmed over it and it looks good but
if you want to improve it I can say that I think it can use

more before and after pics...
a pic or 2 of a dr.

your bullets are too general. theres nothing that makes my mouth quench
and say i have to find that out.

plus you say its not a diet and not an exercise
program but then you talk about 3hrs per wk. which seems
like a lot and you give workout routines, workout schedule
and weight loss book, which make me think its time consuming
work intensive diet and not the quick fix miracle pill people might be
searching for.

you might consider taking the angle that kevin trudeu
takes that the drs dont want you to know this stuff
and surgery is big biz... and the secret is in keeping
your body hormones in non cellulite state...
and there are x amt of things in our daily life
influencing hormone levels that promote cellulite

iow explain more of the what/hormones... and how people
in china and zimbabway dont have cellulite because of
certain foods/vitamins/herbs... and why the info/cure has been
hidden from the public

i think an angle like that might have better appeal.
 
I don't like the pictures bro. Looks like it goes from bad to not that much better! Especially the first set.
 
Great feedback, thanks guys.

The first pic is not a before and after but I see what you mean.
 
Great post, except it is an exercise program... at least partly. I say its not a weight loss program, but it is an exercise program. Just resistance training.

I will definitely include some more about hormones as you suggested. I was going for a legitimate solution to the problem (diet and exercise) rather than a miracle pill but you may be right that people dont want to do any work they just want the problem solved... unfortunately thats not possible.

Not sure what to do here.

theconfidenceman said:
i breifly skimmed over it and it looks good but
if you want to improve it I can say that I think it can use

more before and after pics...
a pic or 2 of a dr.

your bullets are too general. theres nothing that makes my mouth quench
and say i have to find that out.

plus you say its not a diet and not an exercise
program but then you talk about 3hrs per wk. which seems
like a lot and you give workout routines, workout schedule
and weight loss book, which make me think its time consuming
work intensive diet and not the quick fix miracle pill people might be
searching for.

you might consider taking the angle that kevin trudeu
takes that the drs dont want you to know this stuff
and surgery is big biz... and the secret is in keeping
your body hormones in non cellulite state...
and there are x amt of things in our daily life
influencing hormone levels that promote cellulite

iow explain more of the what/hormones... and how people
in china and zimbabway dont have cellulite because of
certain foods/vitamins/herbs... and why the info/cure has been
hidden from the public

i think an angle like that might have better appeal.
Click to expand...
 
if youre going with the exercise angle.. then perhaps.. 6min cellulite cure asapposed to 3 hr... and how most ex can be done while watching tv.. or while youre at work... and how your exercises are more effective because yours uses iso-targetting... and cellulite confusion... and your exercises are more efficient ....
iow different,better,little known, easier, quicker etc..

kevin trudeu got me and his system is basically a starvation diet + obscure hormone shot.. and he says its no diet.. etc..
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Awesome. This is exactly what I needed.

Thanks for the help bro I really appreciate it.
 
Ok, I've made the suggested changes. How's it looking now?

Any more comments?
 
Do you mean cellulite sales pages or sales pages in general?

I agree with you that the typical sales page layout looks stupid, but thats because we're internet marketers and we know whats going on. The average internet user still goes for it.

So yes, it does bring in money.

As IM'ers we see things differently than most people do and can see through sales pages easily.
 
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