Please give suggestions to improve my website

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fultoo11

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Sep 22, 2008

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Hi friends ,
I have made a website www.herbalhealthhealing.com and written original content in it. Please guide me how can i make it more attractive to make sales.
Thanks for your suggestions.

 

helpnub

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Jan 2, 2008

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Looks good, I would:

1. Use a higher resolution/better quality image for the header
2. Change the date to 2009
3. Get rid of the stats and 'page by' links at the bottom
4. Get the grammer checked eg in your FAQ one question:
Are orders shipped discreetly? Yes it is! should be Yes they are ...

 

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aj113

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Aug 3, 2008

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Frankly, the spelling and grammar is just not good enough throughout the site. Do it again or if it is beyond your capabilities to improve further, pay someone to do it.

 

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fultoo11

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Sep 22, 2008

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ya this is just the starting layout, its not proof read yet. Otherwise everything else looks fine ?

 

rjaff

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Dec 22, 2008

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hmm i like the site though it looks really nice .... read a little bit and the grammar needs a little work but overall i think its a good job

time for the traffic to roll in to the site lol

 

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fultoo11

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well that is going to be the most difficult part driving quality traffic.

 

ashilicious

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Seriously man, stop wasting time doing the design work yourself and outsource it to someone who knows what they are doing.

Also get a wordsmith/content writer to go over the copy you've written so far and tidy it up.

You're in a tough industry where people's health is involved so you need to be absolutely credible.

Ash