Please Check My Site
- Thread starter Swifty
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Glenn BH
Regular Member
- Nov 10, 2010
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Really missed the header, logo, top menu...
A comparison table would be great on the homepage. Having that four 5-star reviews doesn't really help your visitors. With a comparison table you could lead them to your preferred site's review.
The reviews seem to be okay, but I'd definitely change the content beside the screenshot. You're wasting precious space by posting general blah-blah there. Summarize your experience with the site, write about its benefits, etc.
You should format your reviews correctly: separate paragraphs, use punctuation marks, subheadings, bullet points. I also missed bold texts that should grab my attention. A clear CTA is also missing at the end (and maybe middle) of the post. A pros-cons list also would help a lot.
As the site is pretty new, I'd change the permalinks asap. Instead of
you should use something like
I hope it helps
A comparison table would be great on the homepage. Having that four 5-star reviews doesn't really help your visitors. With a comparison table you could lead them to your preferred site's review.
The reviews seem to be okay, but I'd definitely change the content beside the screenshot. You're wasting precious space by posting general blah-blah there. Summarize your experience with the site, write about its benefits, etc.
You should format your reviews correctly: separate paragraphs, use punctuation marks, subheadings, bullet points. I also missed bold texts that should grab my attention. A clear CTA is also missing at the end (and maybe middle) of the post. A pros-cons list also would help a lot.
As the site is pretty new, I'd change the permalinks asap. Instead of
HTML:
http://paidsurveys101.co.uk/archives/reviews/paidforreviews-co-uk-reviewyou should use something like
HTML:
http://paidsurveys101.co.uk/reviews/paidforreviews/
http://paidsurveys101.co.uk/reviews/survey-madness/I hope it helps
LittleBoots
Registered Member
- Apr 27, 2012
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Ive used this theme before, in the Orange block header I created a logo that I added to the left and on the Right I added a small banner advert, maybe from adsense or you could create a banner with aff link.
TL;DR Use the top orange banner.
TL;DR Use the top orange banner.
Joesolutions
Registered Member
- Jan 21, 2013
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The overall theme looks OK to me. But remember that the empty header does hurt your readership and I deem that space as very valuable because it is above the main eye-path. You are losing money leaving out that precious space, trust me.
Paidoffer.co.uk review is like you copied and pasted its review there. But the review seems good to me.
I look forward to seeing improvement(s) on your website soon.
Paidoffer.co.uk review is like you copied and pasted its review there. But the review seems good to me.
I look forward to seeing improvement(s) on your website soon.
darekmoore
Newbie
- Nov 26, 2012
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Nice theme mate! have you done SEO for it?
sn0rt
Elite Member
- Jun 12, 2012
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I'll check the rest of it out once I get back from the pub.
Lol. But on a serious note:
The website gives me an impression that you're letting the theme do all of the creative work and you're just worried about adding content. Content (TEXT) is good, but it can't be 100% of your focus. YOUR SITE has 4 seconds to captivate its readers before they decide to leave. There are grammar and punctuation errors, which chips away at your site being an authority figure when it comes to having an online presence. That's all I got from the 4 seconds I stayed on the site.
But, I want to commend you on taking action. Setting a plan and moving in the direction of a goal. You have accomplished something many readers don't. I wish you the best of luck and success with your journey.
BacklinksProject.com
Junior Member
- Jan 2, 2012
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You need to get new logo and new header..
twilightofidols
Power Member
- Nov 11, 2011
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Honestly the site doesn't look too bad at all. But I agree with the other posters there is a lot of wasted space that you aren't utilizing properly. The more avenues to money-making pages you display above the fold the better. I would download Firebug and use it to get rid of some of the padding in between the boxes, get rid of the slanted stripes underneath your logo that's just a waste of space, make the logo smaller and utilize that area in the top right.