Hi guys, I want to hear your opinions about my landerhttp://www.blackhatworld.com/blackhat-seo/attachments/pay-per-view/13037d1339491296-please-bash-my-landing-page-screen.gif
I don't like it at all. I mean I could design one that is 20x better. Get a refund, if you bought it. How to improve : Make it easier on the eyes Better Layout Sent from my HTC VLE_U using Tapatalk 2
Well I'd like if you'll be more detailed about it, e.g. what you didn't like and how would you improve it.
I'm sorry, I haven't saw it, looks like you've edited your post after my reply No I did myself What would you suggest? will changing colors help out, e.g. would it be better to use white background+black text here? Also what can you say about the text, is it also crappy? Should I get off yellow background selection in the text or/and in top and bottem and use bold or something else?
On mobile phone had a few typos. Give me a minute to look over the text, but the layout needs colors easier to the eye. Something that won't make you or I strain the eyes. EDIT: Make the text flow a little more. ;-) Sent from my HTC VLE_U using Tapatalk 2
Why does it look like from 90's ? Drop it entirely and google free landing page templates or wordpress templates, there are tons of much better and free stuff on the internetz.
Great suggestion, I was just going to say that if the colors chosen were bad. Sent from my HTC VLE_U using Tapatalk 2
I always get such reply about 90s about my websites/LPs. My big problem is that I really like this one and in fact don't get why others find the colors bad, I know that I'm not representative here and I have to choose the design which my visitors, not me, will like. I'll try to find something. Sorry but I didn't get what should I do here, what it means
Maybe use a little transition words and use various types of sentences. (declarative, exclaimtory, interogitve, impartive) Sent from my HTC VLE_U using Tapatalk 2
Ok I'll work on the text later. So even if I change the colors to black text on white and remove yellow backgrounds it still will suck? Also note that it's a PPV landing so I'm sure it isn't good at all to put lots of graphics because it will slow down the page.
Your example is basically a big block of text, I would not consider it a landing page. Google some of the tutorials out there on how to create a landing page. Here is a link that has some free templates. http://www.graphicdesignmart.com/squeeze-page-templates/
Sign up on a PTC site and have a look around for some ideas. The worse that could happen is that you make a few pennies while doing your research.
http://www.blackhatworld.com/blackhat-seo/attachment.php?attachmentid=13046&d=1339510751 So here is my new "work", I've just copied the LP I found in google with few editions. Please comment it, is it better then the first?
second one looks much better. But i wonder why the quality of the screenshot is so low. it looks like you use a 1024x768 desktop with windows 95?
