Well I'd like if you'll be more detailed about it, e.g. what you didn't like and how would you improve it.
I did, but do you want more?
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No I did myselfGet a refund, if you bought it.
What would you suggest? will changing colors help out, e.g. would it be better to use white background+black text here?Make it easier on the eyes
Better Layout
I'm sorry, I haven't saw it, looks like you've edited your post after my reply![]()
What would you suggest? will changing colors help out, e.g. will it better to use white background+black text here?
Also what can you say about the text, is it also crappy?
A sheet of toilet paper looks better!
Why does it look like from 90's ? Drop it entirely and google free landing page templates or wordpress templates, there are tons of much better and free stuff on the internetz.
Why does it look like from 90's ? Drop it entirely and google free landing page templates or wordpress templates, there are tons of much better and free stuff on the internetz.
Sorry but I didn't get what should I do here, what it meansEDIT: Make the text flow a little more. ;-)
Sorry but I didn't get what should I do here, what it means![]()
So here is my new "work", I've just copied the LP I found in google with few editions.
Please comment it, is it better then the first?