Personal Identity

Discussion in 'Graphic Design' started by halucination, Sep 19, 2015.

  1. halucination

    halucination Newbie

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    Inspired by Freeview logo I tried making something with my initials. Feedback is appreciated :)

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  2. 2xdswu

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  3. halucination

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    You mean the text below the logo?
     
  4. gh0st_0

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    Not bad OP, I like it!
     
  5. halucination

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    Thank you. Planning to try comples shape next time
     
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    not bad but it's not good too. You can change the font style.
     
  7. burimi007

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    just increase a text font little bit
     
  8. halucination

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    yosh. I see now that this pointy font doesn't go with round shape of ident above. Thank you :D
     
  9. RizaMaster

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    Hello dear!
    Your should use a very innovative logo as you can seen mostly e commerce and e retailing sites are known from their logos. Your logo will show what you are trying to explain !!!
     
  10. nnahlee

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    not bad might want to change text
     
  11. sahduk

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    I really like the gradients in the A. Also maybe a diffrent font?
     
  12. Avrora

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    May be try to decrease the capital letter? As a whole it looks nice)
     
  13. soldierseyes

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    I presume that the letter is supposed to be an A? If thats the case then it looks nice. One small thing, I think the angle is abit off at the moment as it points backwards too much, maybe you could rotate it anti-clockwise by 20 degrees or something.